Wow! What an ending scene!

As you can see I'm reading your fics in order now.

Oh My Goddess the Soap Opera...

A PG soap tho.

Thanks for the fun.

Overall this was another nice addition to your goddess series. I wonder which one I should read next?

Read ya Later.

The Shin-man has caught the attentions of a goddess. Asuka better realize what kind of guy she has! Mara better watch out, she's just pissed off a lot of people! I'd count 'the red-haired demon' as one of the top people for her to watch out for, it takes alot for a mortal to earn a name like that! I'm glad everything worked out in the end for our little group. I really enjoyed the story, the writting was good, the only thing I could see to improve on would be your usage of homophones. Then again, most authors on this site need to improve in that respect!

Mien Gott, You... you... Fiend.

Belldandy doing that?

Man she must be bored.

I guess nobody could see that comong... D

Really good omake! _

That was a touching ending, Slayer, and I hope you have more stories covering the interval between the first and second parts of the trilogy...

The only thing that lets me sad is that both Sayoko and Kensuke don't get a pair, in fact I find the way he is treated very unfair...

Very nice chapter, nothing wrong with it, well written and Mara got what was coming to her. Please keep it going

*wipes tear from eye* that was so touching. Words can't discribe how happy I was that you wrote more. Keep writing. OH! I almost forgot, a quote from all my friends who I read the Neon Genisis: Goddess searies to:"WHEN IS SAYOKO GOING TO GET A BOYFRIEND!" sorry but that is exactly what they say almost every time I read more to them.

Sonya.

Hehehe, Seems mara overstepped her ambitions somewhat! Urd must have talked to "Mom", seems an appropriate punishment. Asuka and Sayoko are closer even after the crap Mara put them through!

Nice ending to this section of you're ongoing saga!

Hipe to see more soon and Hope the Guardians get to kick some more Demon and bad guy butt!

dennisud

dennisud

Why oh why must this happen? Sayoko. Poor,poor Sayoko. Shinji's a dead man... Wait! he can't die but Asuka can at least give them a good beating...

Ok, I know Mara's involved As it is obvious with her talk with Urd. But is is a min-Mara or is there another demon that she is using? Hmm?

Well Can't wit to see if Asuka drwons the two in the fountain but I'm sure you'll be creative enough for us!

dennisud

I'm loving this really I am, I've only just got to see EVA so both this and your other story make a lot more sence. Please keep on going.

Oh, my goddess... this is not good... _

Even if Urd finds out the truth Shinji's position is really bad right now... If we didn't know the future already I'd say he's dead... and Sayoko along with him... Eh, in this scenario, I think I would even help her along... _

Oh you are really getting this deeper and deeper into a coming conforontation between Asuka and Sayoko. (No Duh)! Well this is developing nicely and i can't wait to see who and how they figure out it's a certain Demon behind this.

I also have the feeling that somone higher up is involved too.

dennisud

This is getting better and better.

Like the way A certain Demon is manipulating things . But I think that will be found out sonner or later. The later the more Kaos will ensue.

Like the interaction of the kids and especially the connection of Skuld with Kentaro.

Wonder who will eventually go with Sayko and ais it so obvious that Asuka is getting more irritated with Sayoko as well? Should be a fin ride from now on.

dennisud