The concept I’d definitely interesting but I thought you would perhaps add a few more tales before Ais and Bell became a thing together but in this chapter they both already seem content having children together so I feel like that’s now a lost opportunity but i hope you have something planned regardless.
You went in the right direction of having the idea of the darkness engulfing them but I wish instead of corny dialogues you described the emotions instead of just state them, does that make sense?

Update soon :)

We want more

This chapter was good.
The dream was not bad at all.
I like this story. Ganbateee~

I'm not a big fan of dream sequences my self, but it wasn't bad.

No, it would be ridiculous to have a harem in a story like this where Bell and Aiz are clearly at the center. I'd rather see a Bell dedicated to his future princess. But don't be in a hurry. What I especially want to see is how she will react when she discovers that Bell is cursed by the black dragon. (Imagine, those days are numbered because of that and only the death of the dragon can save him, that would add fuel to the fire haha, but I don't want to influence you.

If for example, Bell had made a secret pact with a "great" surviving spirit (whatever the element) like Argonaut or "certainly" Albert with Aria. Then Bell's victory without Falna would make much more sense. And if I say great spirit, it's because there is a lot of spirit, but Aria was qualified as "great" spirit, so I doubt that a normal spirit can offer a power equivalent to a level 6, even if it holds back.

As a result, with a Falna and unique skills, Bell should "almost" be able to fight on an equal footing with first class adventurers when they fight hard, at level 1 or 2 in combination with spirit, except for Aiz of course, who is more powerful than the others thanks to his ariel "which is also a power of great spirit". But that would allow him to go on an expedition with them.

Definitely loved the chapter, And I like that Bell is more capable hear being able to handle Finn and even winning even though, it was a test. I can't wait till Bell and Aiz's relationship blossoms into romance and everyone's reactions of Bell's and Aiz's relationship. :3 And of course the jealousy of a certain Elf and Werewolf. Lol. I'm routing for Bell x Aiz x Harem. :3 Keep up the great work and looking forward to the next one. :3 Stay safe from the Corona.

Good chapter, hope for more soon.

This is great keep this story going and can’t wait until the next chapter comes out

Love this. Please make Chapter 3. Man I want to see Bete trying to tell Bell to back off and Ais standing between them.

This is good but if you feel unmotivated take a break if u need. Your 2 fanfics has lots a potential tho.

Nice keep going.

its good also i wonder is bell a full spirit and that is the reason why he won against finn also finn probably held back but still and one more thing will bell have some reaction to the dungeon bc black dragon was born from the dugeon?

great chapter