ahhh this is so good! Love how you wrote Zhalia, and the tension is amazing. Can't wait to read more!

Hey! Loved the first chapter. Really could Imagine this happening. The talk With Zhalia and Metz was quite interesting and a great Idea. So excited to read about the upcoming Encounter. Please Update fast ;)

Hi there!
That’s a really good chapter! Plus, you’re focusing on Dante and Zhalia so I can only love it!
I really appreciate that you’re exploring their first encounter after Dante’s left for NY (an event that broke my heart...) and the fact that they did not really talk to each other since the battle! You kept everyone in character, and Metz... I love his father-like behaviour, I thought he needed more attention in the series, well you’ve done it!
I also really appreciate the « hero complex », it made me laugh even though it’s quite true! And Cherit drunk? Excellent!
I look forward to read more from you!
Take care!
Adalia