Oml I forget who Ricky is.

I jumped at the last sentence. Okay...I'm actually scared now. I had to turn around to make sure nothing was behind me...I currently have severe chills. Good job.

This story is great so far...although I'm kinda waiting for Ponyboy to get really scared.

Great story...suspenseful and well done

oooh this looks really good so far! I like the premise that's being set up, I'm really curious to see where it will go from here!
Also really loving your characterization- particularly of Dally. In the book Pony mentions how Dally was the only one who'd really fight with the others among the gang if something bothered him, and I think you portrayed that really well. Dally's loyal to all of them, but soon as he thinks Johnny's being bothered he turns on Two-Bit. I think it wouldn't hurt for him to relax and trust the others a bit more but still, you've portrayed him very accurately IMHO and like how he is in the book.

Thank you for writing! can't wait to read more!

I just want to say this is one of the best fan fics I have ever read. It's so thorough and I'm so glad you didn't stop half way through. Love it!

I love the flashbacks. Theyre so cute and I love how you made Johnny get his nickname- Johnnycake. I always wondered how he got it and now I have an explanation

This is probably a pretty late review but OH MY GOSH THAT WAS AMAZING! Please write another story like this! You had me in tears! I loved how you did Dally's and Darry's emotional sides! And the way you built up suspense- magnificent! And I really love how the characters were true to themselves, and not out of character and yet they fit perfectly into your plot! Excellent job my dear! :D

This story is perfection. I LOVE how you write the flashbacks! Those stories are so cute and creative! I too my hat to you

Ooh suspense-y... O.o love it!

I love you , your existence and your writing skills.

Aww, it's a nice ending!

Glad that everything is going to be okay now! Keep up the good work!

I really like this chapter! It's so cute!

I like how Johnny got his nickname! Little Soda is just so cute!

I laughed so hard when Soda followed his mom's action and poured milk on his cake. Too cute!

Keep up the good work

that was such a nice ending!

Sooooooooooo good. And I like when ppl bring in Tim. Also I think this was a good rep of dally. In the other chapters he was getting a little soft. Here he obviously cared but wasn't about to be nice about it or take to being babied