This whole story reads like an edgy teenager imagining adult relationships, got a bit to go in the relationship department but your writing is nice

Love this story and can't wait to see more.

Would've been more realistic if the morning after was awkward and not declaring feelings already. After the awkward morning then have them run into each other or something then tie them into a connection (probably crime/hero related) that'll give them excuse to spend time together then develops as friends and slowly build it into a romantic relationship.

Doing it like this is like rushing straight into the relationship finish line just after they took a step into the race. There's no development no drama no cute awkward moments no nothing

Too fast. I know its a one night stand but im talking about the relationship. You don't call each other pet names after a one night stand.