Um... I’m very confused. He walked in the class in costume and your sentences are not exactly together but you can edit it to fix that. Um... maybe have something happen at night first like the PJs actually talking to the bat hero before transitioning to day time. It was a tad fast.

Hmmm probably try to set the scene more ok? It’s ...interesting but you did go too fast going from night to day. Best to slow down ok? But good luck :)