Man dude. I don't think I can convey beauty and hope like you ever could. That part with Jason's intent - the willingness to turn 180 degrees, saying sorry till 2 am and meaning it every damn time. That was beautiful. So was the night sky and the stars. It was breathtakingly gorgeous the way you described everything. Even the part about Annabeth. God. Wow.
And hhahahahahahaha
blue blue blue - nope, it's not working was AWESOME
Also, loved the part about music.
"Our soul craves music, that's why our heart has beats "

Over 100,000 words in just under 2 months... That's honestly a feat I can only dream of. Keep up the great work.

Damn, this was a great chapter. I’m happy Annabeth and Jason got their intents to forgive them. What is Jason’s intent? Is it an eagle? A hawk? A um, duck? Perhaps it is a mythical animal like Percy’s, maybe a griffin. Hmmm. This is gonna bother me.

That was...sublime.I'm very very sorry I couldn't read before, honestly my studies and my health just did not allow it, but that was beautiful. I found this chapter much more beautiful because I prefer the night and the moon than the sun. And the dark Percy was great, very believable and realistic. Honestly your writing is so soul-touching and beautiful - you have a penchant for description. And for lyrical prose. It was beautiful. AWESOME AND AMAZING!
Thanks for the compliments (seriously dude, I do NOT deserve so many )
:)

Will Percy have any water powers?
I mean your story is pretty cool but we would like some water action

As always, I love the chapter! Great work! Can't wait for the next update! :D

Nice chap my guy, keep it going

YEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
FINALLY
I'M LOVIN IT
THE REUNION *sobs in relief*
AND I CAN SORTA SEE THE TENTATIVE PERCABETH HAPPENING. AND I DID NOT KNOW THE ADVICE WOULD HELP YOU SO MUCH COZ THE PERCABETH BEGINNING WAS PERFECT.
THAT WAS GREAT.
Also, couple of things
Maybe mention how Percy has physically changed due to training from Annabeth's and Jason's POV since that gives us a better picture of what the training accomplished. Maybe he got leaner, more defined, muscular...whatever
Also, show Percy summoning via call to his friends since they're gonna be hecka impressed and that scene is gonna be awesome.
Also, why don't Jason and Annabeth want Percy to know that they asked for Apollo's help in training?
Have them train together, it'll help them work as a team MUCH more efficiently

Great chapter. For the longest time I thought I’d have to hunt you down because I thought you weren’t gonna tell me Annabeth and Jason’s plan, but you did it so I’m happy. That sounds like a very good book and I wish you the best luck with it. I can respect you for the ending note about being a listening ear and being able to prey for people you don’t know. I’m religious as well, but struggle in becoming better with that. Lastly, oh cool! I’ve never had my review responded too directly by name!

Umm pretty sure doing a pushing with a healthy 70-80 kg adult sitting on top of you is equivalent to a bench press of around 110-120 kgs(weight of Apollo 60-70% of Percy's weight)
Not sure what these 16 year olds are eating to be honest

I hope your book is gonna be a banger and I don’t doubt it will, although I am looking forward to Luke getting some assbeating for bein a bitch

You good my guy! What’s your book about?

Loved the chapter, but seriously, just gimme a reunion and throw in some Percabeth. You're reeeeaaallllyyyy dragging this out

Oobleck is a non-Newtonian fluid. It's actually pretty cool. Also, I love the deepness and the philosophy, but seriously, show me Percy reuniting with his friends soon. Aren't they worried for him?