Really good story so far

I hope Naoya gets the lighting twins.

- I'm glad to see that Chiho is getting better.
- I think Haihane should start looking for chances to get away from there while she still can.

Loved the chapter

Few bits

Love that we got the lighting twins again this chapter the only way it would have been better is if both interacted with Naoya no wait it be better if he winged them haha

Glad we got Toyotama turning up again

So Naoya will be meeting Musubi soon that’s nice and dam you for teasing us with that idea of Musubi reacting to Naoya because honestly I’d love to see Minato just have Tsukiumi and Kusano and Naoya gets Musubi and Matsu no wait the ideal if Minato not being apart of the game haha but hey ho

Haihane’s reaction the to the Itsuki and Amebane joining was pretty funny and yeah I’m firmly in the belief that even if Amebane gets some training due to the dismal relationship he has with Itsuki the small boost from training will still put him leagues behind Benitsubasa

Did like Karasuba mentioning Itsuki wants to sleep with Naoya still hope she’s one of his three human loves

Oof I needed my monthly dose of this great story.
Now you made me feel bad for the Lighting Twins they really are a unlucky pair, but at least is nice that they still know Miya and the both of them aren't evil just survivors in a death game.

After everything I forgot that Minato existed in this story, but soon he will find Musubi and the others..

That Higa bastard deserves to he brutally killed without mercy...

Oh boy Haihane is in a huge mess and apparently without any way out especially if she don't want to get hunted down by Karasuba.

Man, looks like Kaho is fitting in quite well, and she's been introduced to Miya's Hannya mask and put the fear in her. She and Naoya both ran into Hibiki again, geez they just can't catch a break can they. Well, at least they didn't have to fight in this one.

And, did the same thing when Benitsubasa and Hikari started fighting again. I'm guessing that the Lightning twins are going to be winged by Naoya. I really hope so. Though, I can't help but wonder what will happen when Benitsubasa and Hikari are constantly in each others presence.

So now Higa has come across Chiho and is willing to use her as leverage in order to get Naoya to comply with his wishes. I hope they can save her before it gets to far. And, I hope that Toyotama is able to get out of this situation and maybe even help save Chiho.

Could you have Musubi become Naoya Sekirei also could you have Naoya join forces with Sanada of the West, Minato and Yukari to completely dismantle the The East and South cause it would be cool for Naoya to have that show of dominance considering he wants to save the Sekirei so him taking out the two biggest threats to that would be cool you could also use Chiho situation for the beginning to that also could you have Yukari have No. 11 and No. 12 also

This was a great chapter! Will the Lightning Twins be winged to Naoya or Minato? Or will they still have their canon Ashikabi? And Toyotama...originally I wanted her to be freed from Higa and winged to Naoya...but now I’m also kind of hoping that Chiho wings her after being freed from the hospital. I dunno...you got me shipping Chiho/Toyotama now. That is impressive XD
I can’t wait for the next one

Okay at this point if Naoya gets the twins he has officially replaced seo which would make sense as a butterfly effect of his existence like seo was killed before the plan like Miyas husband that make things interesting.
So I’m guessing a brother is about to find about his other brothers harem just how will that conversation go then the sister joins in oh boy that’ll be fun to read.

Since kaho and naoya started talking about musubi I'm going out on a limb and saying that she and Minato will be crash landing very soon should have naoya be sitting and talking with Miya when musubi and Minato arrive

Kaho talking above Karasuba sorry this woman is not meant to defeat her.

Karasuba to me is to be pitied because everything bad has been given to her including her Ashikabi whom doesn’t love her.

For the one piece story when the oc character gets sunshine, that’s when the lions head tattoo appears on his back instead of sometime in the future, that seems more reasonable right?

Wander if anyone realize how similar Sekirei is to Final Fantasy VII.

Hope we get the twins with Naoya

Any chance of Minato being left with three sekirei and Naoya gets Matsu chan

Also can he get with chiho and yukari

So now Kaho and Naoya have found each other at last. But they had to deal with the likes of the Lightning Twins in order to do so. Wonder what's going to happen when she and Musubi meet again.

Also, it seems like Benitsubasa and Hikari have a history together. Them getting into a fight and constant arguing and badmouthing each other. Hikari insulted Benitsubasa's chest, big mistake there, and she show her why.

By the way, I think maybe you should have the Lightning twins either go to Minato or Naoya.

Also, Yukari could get Mutsu, Shinna, Nanami(if she isn't going to be with either of the boys), and maybe the those Blonde twins maybe.