A little bit rushed but this has potential. Update, please...

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Help him.

I’m loving this story! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Okay something doesn’t make sense, your saying his family died a week before he got to beacon. So Jaune and his sister fought all the way to Argus, Saphron fell in love with Terra, and Jaune went on a mission and met Pyrrha all in a week?

Do you remember me?

Is Jaune a Faunus? I mean you have Adam as a reacquiring character, probably to be his foil, and he does have the random sharp teeth. I mean this is obviously a nod to Suigetsu and the other Seven Swordmen but does it have a in story explanation? I mean characters in RWBY don't have random odd features unless they are Faunus. As for a weapon name I am not picky enough about it to vote. When it comes to the pairing I am also good with any of them as at this point I an see Jaune getting with any of them. Although Ruby, Yang and Pyrrah seem to be the more likely ones as they are on his team, and when it comes to that I find it funny to think of Jaune as Tiayang 2.0 and getting with the Rose/Branwen girls. Also how good is Jaune's control over water? I mean can he use the refracting properties of water to hide things from sight, or what about something more simple like separating a body of water from it's impurities to create pure water to use against lightning/electricity?

ferveo mors could be a good name

Halitus Mors, Vapos Mors, or Ferveo Mors

Es genial, espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo muchas gracias.

Awesome chapter. The different teams I like. Excited for more dude

not bad my only wish is to see jaunt use the other six mist swords

Excellent update and I like how the test went along with the two different teams and them sharing a room.

pyrrhas giving off yandere vibes...RUUUUN!

Excellent first chapter

I Vote Lancaster and Executioner