I like what you're doing in this story here. I'm really looking forward to seeing how it proceeds. I wonder if you'll have Noble Red live by the end of it. If you do, I wonder what their new lives would be like. Can't say they'll be human exactly, from what Shem Ha said here, but their appearance is still quite human like; I'm sure they'll blend in, under an alias, so long as they don't use their powers.

I can only assume Millaarc is the only key to waking Tsubasa up. She was the one who placed that brainwashing spell on her; she should be able to remove it. Though that may require having her look at Tsubasa in the eyes, which may prove to be difficult on her own. I hope she and Maria cooperate in time. And likewise, I do hope, truly and very much so prayingly (yes I know that is not a word), HOPE you give that damn old geezer what he deserves by the end of it. Why? Because neither in the main show nor the OVA Specials did they ever say what became of that disgraced and ruined man.

Ahem, but other than that, this is a great story so far. I'm really looking forward to more.

A desire to protect something can become the very thing that destroys it if you become twisted in the ways you achieve your goals along the way

I never liked Fudou to be honest ever since I watched the show and saw him he reminded me of just about any old fart that was trying to bring back the glory days of whatever they got into their screwed up heads

Anyway a good chapter to build up the tension and explain the situation overall now I am left wondering what if Hibiki starts using some of the power of Shem-Ha even subconsciously the god making making sure that the both of them survive the battle only to turn almost everything on its head in the process

We shall have to wait and see keep up the awesome work with this story until I hear from you again stay vigilant and safe

I'm willing to bet that even without the Curse, there will still be pain, but at least humanity will be one planet with no quarrels between countries, and it will be even better if Shem-Ha redeems herself and the Custodians and Humans unite as one, hence why I believe that the Curse should at least be gotten rid of without Shem-Ha putting her plan into motion. Also, that man from 2,000 years ago mentioned by Shem-Ha in chapter 3...will we learn who he is later on in the story?

After reading My Shunshine as well as the updated version of it several times I can honestly say you write amazing stories hope this one will be updated in the near future shows a lot of promise especially since Hibiki might be able to show Shem-Ha that humans even with the Curse there can be understanding even if it might cause pain for a while

Well we will see how a so called God and a God slayer can work with each other or will Hibiki get taken over by Shem-Ha after Miku is rescued from Fudo causing even more havoc for everyone we will have to wait and see

Just wanted to say, I think that the special attack that Hibiki uses in the Three Spears of the Sun event in Symphogear XD unlimited would be an excellent final attack in the final battle against Fudō, considering that Hibiki's power, as well as the symbol at the end of the attack itself, would be combined with Shem-Ha's in a spectacular way!

Are you going to have Noble Red (unknowingly powered up by Shem-Ha) team up with the girls for certain moments (unlike what happened in canon)?

Elsa, Shirabe and Kirika Song: Cutting Edgex2 Ready Go!

Millaarc, Tsubasa and Maria Song: Fushichō no Flamme

Vanessa, Hibiki and Chris Song: Take This! "All Loaded"

Again, these are just suggestions. You don't have to use them if you don't want to, because this is YOUR story, and you should make the decisions here. Thanks.

In fact, that last story gave me an idea for a story of my own connected to yours (My Sunshine)!

I hope you upload more chapters soon! I absolutely love this story and your other story, "My SunshineNuova Alba