Nice chapter

I think you're story premise is pretty interesting just need some polishing and your OC is kinda-retarded like some of them said but I think it's a proper reaction in this kind of situations, he just want to have some fun in Yggdrasil and not getting transported in YJ universe, also you're OC is a human so his morality is still there so and only getting dulled a little.
So good luck!

MOAR.

Ok I'm just gonna say this your character is an idiot and u made some grammatical errors like the fallout wars didn't happen and heroes exist in this world not that they didn't exist. Ainz is a massive sometimes but he is smarter than your oc and the particular bloodlust of his doesn't make any sense even if he became his avatar his bloodlust seems unnecessary and cut down on the swearing it ok to use it now and again but it gets tiresome to read

Bandits never last.

The story is good you should continue writing it

ok im interested but I'm also a bit wary on how you plan to take the story

Hunter x hunter and overlord crossover.

I like where this is going

The mc is amateur and incompetent.

Not to mention childish and Naive.

Youre probably trying to sound humble by letting us know that your story is "going to be shit" but its honestly better to keep things like that to yourself. By saying that youre only going to keep readers away because they dont want to read "shit" stories in the first place

You know he can have more stats than that because he's a pvper (ainz was weak because he had a pve summoner/necromancer build, shalltear for example has 720 stats and theirs are higher stats than that)

...retard

Aw, no Ainz, rats, got fooled. Not that it matters, Ainz as Momon would've made a cool hero, but Nazarick's actions would've gotten him and them wiped out by heroes they'd honestly stand no chance against. Nazarick would've had to stay hidden while say, Momon and Sebas and the other good karma NPCs went out to play hero and build reputation.

Its Irrelevant though since its an OC story, and considering how many unsatisfying OC-centric fan fics I've read over the years in every fandom, I tend to just skip them now. So I'll bow out here. Though to your credit, you write fairly well, so I wish you luck.

MOAR.