Hi there, I’m going with the miniseries’ portrayal of Strawberry, as I loved the way they handled the character and Olivia Coleman’s performance, but while Thethuthinang was likeable and loyal to Hyzenthflay, she was sadly under-utilised in episode 4 and she didn’t have much in terms of character, just being nice and supportive. I still really liked her, but I feel she could’ve done more in the story.

Hi there, I really loved this story, as I emphasised with Kevin's fears, and I love how much Hazel, Bigwig and Holly care for him. Also, in my WD story, I'm torn between pairing Emily with Strawberry, or Thethuthinang, the former for her lovable quirky, but lonely side, or the latter for her kind, loyal and uttermost faith in Hyzenthflay, and on a side note, I'm not trying to copy Kevin and Thethuthinang's relationship, whoever, I choose, I will make it a unique romance, that takes time, work and allows Emily to get to know either Strawberry or Thethuthinang. What do you think?

This was a well-written short story. Kevin's fear is understandable, and you do a good job at making the scene where he is attacked by the insects terrifying. The other characters are also portrayed well, notably Fiver, and also Captain Holly, who remains a good adoptive father for Kevin.

Also, thank you for you review to Possibilities!