Your theory is pretty amazing...
Especially that theory about Doctors Art...it explains some things on why the Doctor is so Good on his Job and why Scout describe him whose eye's only see Victory..
Just a question here... W, why'd she left Doctor? She's with Doctor in Babel working together.. In my opinion she's the type to follow Doctor on where he goes..
Got any idea why?
And Good Job for Saving Yelena since I couldn't save her... THANKS T-T...
Im really Grateful...

Keep up the good work fellow Doctor

Good stuff! There’s no glaring mistake within the writing as far as I can see. As another Arknights fan, keep up the good work!

This has a whole lot of potential! I like this a lot. As a global player, it was interesting to see this history of Patriot, but I was never much of a guy who cared for spoilers. Still though, maybe include a spoiler warning? Regardless, you did a fantastic job here! Keep doing what you do!

-E113

I enjoy where this is going! However, I do agree that I'd prefer for the expositions to be done as descriptions instead of dialogue, although in the end the choice is yours and your writing stays true to established characters that I can't bring myself to mind. :)

this is actually neat after reading the lore of the game i played, let see where this is going. i like your skyrim story btw. I hope this story is not one those abandoned story that stop being updated after 2 to 4 chapters in.

Actually, to expand on my previous review, I noticed how there wasn't actually any description, only dialogues. or I just missed one and didn't pay attention. Either way, I hope you don't steer too much into only dialogues, I hope that there is actual descriptions of Chernobog, what is happening when they are talking, the fight scenes, etc.

Hey, I like this! I always wanted a story with FrostNova and Patriot, considered writing one myself, but writing is hard. Especially for an established series. So you definitely got my attention with this one.

Kali x Doc? Interesting