Reviews for Mother Flame (Tsunayoshi Sawada)
LindsayTheNinjaDragon chapter 2 . 7/28
Hello, I don't intend to be nasty or anything but, well, you haven't even started this story yet...
Do you think that you will actually be starting to write the story soon?
Sakura Lisel chapter 1 . 6/21
Wait... where's the ACTUAL story for this? I clicked just to read it after seeing the summary...
Lunary chapter 2 . 6/21
Sounds interesting.
So lets wait and see what happens next.

Regards,
Lunary
candinaru25 chapter 2 . 6/18
oh i know the feeling. and i can wait for when the story gets updated
Kiri Namikase chapter 2 . 6/17
RIGHTTTTTTT...because with the current circumstances of the world ... sorry for being insensitive ... but if you take so much updating at least warn if you get sick or leave a story ... do not let us turn 80 years hoping that you are well and update ... today I am 23
Hiiva Peruna chapter 2 . 6/16
lol
zakuranavarro chapter 1 . 6/11
Jajaja me muero por ver que depara esta nueva aventura
Elfin69 chapter 1 . 6/8
Sounds like this is going to be good, how much of an age gap between Rosaline and Tsuna (hopefully he will be closer or just a little older than her)
Luxy chapter 1 . 6/6
.3.
Aries chapter 1 . 6/2
I have used the translator so I'm sorry if something is not well understood. That is a lot of time, but that does not matter to me as long as you do not abandon the story or at least without warning as many, it could take 50 years and it would not matter to me as long as it is completed or you warn if you abandon it. I do not want to put pressure or anything but it is appreciated to see someone so dedicated.
Thanks for your effort and much encouragement
lara.niric chapter 1 . 5/30
Well even if the chapters end up being as short as this one you can sign me up for reading all of them until the very end. This seems like a promising story.
Harlequin Shadow chapter 1 . 5/28
Looks like it'll be very interesting. Really looking forward to seeing more!
QueenShadowTaiga7 chapter 1 . 5/28
HOORAY
foxchick1 chapter 1 . 5/27
Excited to see what happens next.
Narutofan8762 chapter 1 . 5/27
The idea is interesting, but I have concerns. You say it will it will be 300-360 chapter until you get to the point of Rosaline's quote. Even with you short your chapters are, it will be a length that few writers reach. And that still would only be like half of the story (hopefully). You also say that you will basically going to rewrite the KHR canon with only minor negligible changes. I would be annoying if a majority of this story was basically the canon series.

Why not just start at the point where the wizards want Rosaline back? I don't see a reason to basically rewrite the whole series with an extra character if it's not going to drastically change. You can summarize how she met Tsuna and how their relationship grow in like 1 chapter. If you want to show special moments like Tsuna proposing to Rosaline or their wedding, then you can use flashbacks. I also hope you don't spend time focusing on the other 12 pairings.

I don't want to discourage you from writing this story. I just want to get to what I think is the main event, i.e. Rosaline's quote in the summary.
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