Why did the grammar and punctuation in the last chapter disappear? It felt really rushed.

I have to agree with the person before me, the ending is extremely rushed. You jumps from the sixths detention to the last one, the tenth. And suddenly they are together...

I do not geht why you made lupin such a "Bad" person. Normally he is nice, has a rather calm personality and is not such a judging person. He is the complete opposite in this book

It just seemed like all of a sudden you wanted to end to story, the details were lacking and the last chapter was all over the place. You didn't even really finish what was happening and then all of a sudden they were together.
I liked the beginning. The end needed a lot more planning.

Ohh yeah and ware did the punctuation and gremmer go in the last chapter?

it kind of spoiled it for me

I hate it when you do this I get my hopesmup for another chapter

This was grate butt theire is so much more that could happen now they're togetha

any chance of a sequel?

AHHHH SO MANY FEELS WHILE READING THIS! Thanks for this really awesome fanfic :))

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I really liked this story. I wish you kind of explained pansy but yeah... And I wouldn't mind knowing how things worked out :) thanks for the story!

KCK-Lumcer

Cool story! I would of found it funny if Draco's last note to Harry was "Meet me in the prefects bathroom 11 p.m. sharp" but lived ur ending even if they did kind of hate each other until the very end... kind of.

This story is awesome! Please do more full length fics like this! I would totally read those if it happens! Thanks! -th

Great story-just so you know all your punctuation has gone missing from the final chapter.

So this was great up until the last chapter. Not sure what happened, it's like you forgot grammar, spelling, and punctuation all together. It really took away from the last chapter, and I have to say that I couldn't enjoy the end of the story because of it. Parts of the story were a bit scattered at places, and point of view changes were blurred at times. Sorry.

So this was great up until the last chapter. Not sure what happened, it's like you forgot grammar, spelling, and punctuation all together. It really took away from the last chapter, and I have to say that I couldn't enjoy the end of the story because of it. Parts of the story were a bit scattered at places, and point of view changes were blurred at times. Sorry.

It was reasonably good until the last chapter, a disappointment. You had so many errors, there would be no way to count them all. I don't know what happened, but it looked like you left out your comman sense on this one. Did the original author put it up for adoption and you finished it?