I just found this story. I love the way you are writing this complex character. Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you.

Please write a Dani story from the past you talked about!

Gil just got a better understanding of Bright mental capacity. A better idea on how to handle him. Bright knows what is coming but knows he can handle better than the 2 weeks off work.

Loved Malcolm and Dani's interactions in this one. Can't wait to read Gil's great entrance! Looking forward for the next chapter!

Omg! I'm broad daylight! Thats...I mean ok it's hilarious. Oh... he's dead. I...wow. yea

Condemned man indeed! Gil is not going to be a happy camper. Malcolm is up the proverbial creek without a paddle. Love the way Dani is relishing him getting into trouble like an annoying sister but also promising to have his back.

My new favorite show! I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Well at least you know that you are not the only one whom Gil punishes.
And you know that your hide now belongs to him.
Still it is better than living with your mother. And shudders at the thought of prison.

I’m loving this so much. Reading your fics brings me joy. Thank you 3

Every time you post a new fic I'll feel like a child at Christmas, thanks you

My goodness. If Malcolm was trying to get Gil's attention, I imagine he succeeded. This is a great cliff hanger! I can't wait to read more!

So great to see this sequel from you. I have to say, when Malcolm decides to rebel, he goes all out. wouldn't want to be in his shoes when Gil and Jessica find out.

Oh my goodness he is in trouble. I have to say that I know how he felt deciding to make the wrong choices.
When I was a kid sometimes, I would think is this worth it. It always seemed worth it, until you got caught. Great chapter can't wait to read more

Wouldn't want to be in Malcolm's shoes right now... Well, he literally asked for it. And I can't wait to read him receiving it.

...omg! Well...Gill may not kill him but I think Malcolm may wish he had by the time its over! WOW