A enjoyable read as aways. Love the cliffhanger! Can't wait to see what comes next! :)

Great start so far! The plot sounds super interesting, and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!

First of all, I want to say I'm sorry too for not responding as I should've. Dealing with the pandemic going on at the moment has my mind occupied as many others' minds, plus I'm currently doing stuff around the home so takes up a lot of my time, keeps me out of trouble ;).

As for this story, yikes what inspired this plot line? I mean it's actually good, has purpose, Alvin has to make sure that they accept that he's dying rather than dead already, I think that's actually clever. Bringing him back so he can stay in the hospital for 2 days before crashing (Cardiac Arrest) again and passing away, it opens good channels.

I hope the apology above is enough to convince you to continue conversing with me. I also understand your frustration, I have been there, ok. You made a mistake, admitted it and apologised, now I'm here to forgive you for the outburst. Take care of yourself mentally as well as physically in these trying times, ok. Chapter 1 is a good start, looking forward to what you come up with next :)

Hay its me this is a cool story its kind of sad i want everyone who hurt Alvin to say sorry to him. I have some bad news though my hometown of Yakima Washington isn't doing well with the virus 110 new cases just this weekend so we're not going to be out of quarantine until August not cool.