Sorry to bring it up, but chapter 2 still brings up the secret power between Naruto and Saala. Other than that though, I actually love the new direction. Doesn’t feel so...cluster-fucky?
Nice comeback.

This read so much better. I already commended you on the plot improvements from the orignal to this one. The only issue was how Rias acted since every other character read well. However, these changes to Rias' character were a major improvement and improves the overall enjoyment of this story.

Yeah, this is better, we can clearly see how they actually feel about each other now.
I could've considered Rias being a tsundere instead of bipolar but her mood switches were pretty extreme, not to mention I didn't even know if she even liked Naruto at the time, let alone love.
That said, now though, she heard that Naruto was still upset about what she said, why doesn't she just apologize to him, and his mother? Unless you wanna call out her devil's pride getting in the way, it seems kind of silly.
Still, a lot of improvement made, well done.
Cheers

This sorta-rewrite flows much better and feels more real than the previous version. I honestly couldn't tell what was going on in the earlier version.

Ehhh I was a fan of the 2nd (previous) version more. The dialogue here is kinda weird in that it seems like you're trying to hard to make them sound like teenagers then there are times where you make them say things too robotically. I was also a big fan of his power and seeing how it would be used in the future, be it his relationships or during fights but I guess we'll never know. Read a comment saying that the story kinda lost its immersion and it was kinda right, felt like there were too many filler moments. Kinda lost me with this remake honestly but I'm gonna see how next chapter goes at least

Always been a great story. I definitely think the changes made have a significant impact on the flow and feelings of the story. Great work as usual, can't wait to see more.

Hello There. Great work with the changes. Now the story seems a lot more fluid to read.

Very epic.
The changes made this story even better!

Great chapter and awesome story, and the changes are welcomed it made it a much smoother story keep it up.

Amazing story, truly amazing.

The way you managed to capture Naruto and Rias emotions in this new version is far more consistent and believable, the story just flows better and it makes more sense. I can't wait for the next chapter my friend.

Keep up the good work and remember have fun writing.

This is wayyyy better than it was previously, those bipolar moments got me on edge because I really didn’t know when they’d pop up. Now the story and interaction are smoother.

Honestly i love how this story is going so far and i have read the changes that happened and surprisingly i agree that its much better that before. Not to say that it wasn't good previously but it's better now.

On the main note however its finally coming the main course and my favourite part so far of all the rewrites of aka whirlpool the challenge from riser and the general shock and awe of naruto's power man I'm so excited to read how it's gonna go down now.

Anyways thanks and keep up the marvelous work.

I read your first "version" and I liked it, but now I love it, great job, and I look forward to the next chapter

Why do I suddenly want to be a retard?

Eh, the mood shifts were a bit immersion breaking, so more power to ya.

I love this story and I like you didn’t listen to those bullies it just show you don’t care what people think about you