Awesome job! Keep it up!

Finally an update

I love this story! Keep it up!

Ok so the plot is good. Morlun's Father's name is Solus, not Sorlun or however you spelled it. Miles and Gwen are too romantic. It makes me uncomfortable when I constantly see:
"I missed you." Miles said as he kissed Gwen on the cheek. Then he does a little bit later. Then soon Gwen pecks him on the cheek. Suddenly they are making out. Then later-
"I missed you Gwen." Then they kiss. Please don't make it too extreme. They are like 15, 16, I don't know. I don't want to see they lose their virginity.