I've got to admit. This fanfiction is amazing!
Not many good fanfiction about Jaime and Winter.
This one is really awesome.
Keep up with the Awesome writing!

Pls fix the walls of text or get a beta to help you with it.

The concept is there but the pacing and story is kind of off. its more like I'm reading a series of events being told to me, rather than a story where I can be absorbed into. Hopefully you can try to iron these things out as you continue to write.

Thanks for the update!

When is the revised version of Baby Steps coming out?

Good chapter
Miss Goodwitch's first name is spelled Glynda

Love it, I can't to see how Jaune and Winter act as a couple when she arrives for the tournament.

Pobre Yang, son muchos personajes OC, pero son necesarios. Gran trabajo, ansias el siguiente capítulo muchas gracias.

Time manipulation?

Me an intellectual:
Za Warudo

I want to ask why is he so tall!? I mean it's kinda weird to put him as 7'2. Do you have a reason for that?

Interesante, espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo muchas gracias.

Very intriguing and lovely fic

Gary Sue Jaune Plagiarism of Coeur’s best story

This trash

This story is interesting and I look forward to next chapter but please some part is too big break them up a little bit and you don't need to give a lot of imformation in one chapter agian try to break it up that all I can give or it may become too hard to read (maybe that just me). over this is good. sorry for my grammar english is not my native language.

Fix that wall of text, as it is it's a headache to look at.