Love it! So cute and nice characterization. Love how you built that tense moment before they actually kissed. :3

Way to go !~~

this was so cute! i love how sweetly you write the two of them together; it reminds me of the kind of relationship I wanted when I was 20 - in the best way. Keep it up! and I can't wait for your update on the other story :)

I love it! Feels like it fits so well with the sketch!

Loved it!you know we all are staring at the sketch too;oh Natsu!

Yeah, if they hadn't gotten through everything they have been through, they wouldn't have such a sweet bond.

Hello! This is so adorable! I love it! I'm lucky to have read another story about that wonderful sketch on Twitter. I knew writers will definitely be inspired to write something about it especially with that almost kiss that we didn't see the end in the sketch. I love how it's different from the one I just read. I love how many ideas were made with that cliffhanger kiss. I love how you also included that part of Natsu sticking out his tongue too! I was not expecting to see that in the sketch too just like how you wrote how Lucy didn't expect Natsu to stick out his tongue. I'm also surprised how he'd know of doing such thing just as Lucy is! This was so fun to read. I enjoyed reading it and I love everything about it especially the heart pounding meeting of their eyes when Lucy stood up from her desk to see Natsu grinning at her that was so cute! My heart jumped out of my chest and I was twisting like crazy from their sweetness! Thank you for this wonderful story! I'm really glad to have read it. I'm satisfied with the sketch though we were all trolled in the end, but fanfictions made it better. Enjoy writing! Thank you again, have a nice day and stay safe!

Yaaasssssss I love it

Aww this was so stinkin cute, I loved it!

Awww, I love it.
The kiss was great, but their convo before hand was so sweet.