looks interesting got to admit i miss these types of bleach stories and looking forward to see were you take this story

I love ir i need MORE

Oh? Is it Lunar Ichigo time?

Well, looking at orders from Central 46 here, I hope Ichigo finally realizes that in the end, Aizen had: TOTAL REASON! When a system is rotten, you can only change a society by destroying that system with a bloody revolution. The society of souls is corrupt and only through genocide over 50 percent of its population, we will be able to see any real change in that place.

Ah yes! A Bleach that is not cliché? Lol. I see here an Ichigo betrayed by the society of souls in an unscrupulous way. It means that the society of souls here kills the friends of their savior and remains for that very reason, hehehehe ... What a mature and talented story by the author (Sarcasm).

It's not bad. That being said, it's pretty weak that after all that, he doesn't kill Soi-fon. I get that he wants to save who he can, but yeah. In stories like this, I don't like redemption arcs either, so I hope you aren't planning that with Soi-Fon. I'd expect Ichigo to figure out being hollow, quit being a bitch, and bust in to kill everyone he thinks he needs to.

Besides that it's an ok start. To be honest, I'm not really a fan of stories where Soul Society kills everyone off for convoluted reasons. Yes, I get the reasoning here, but them choosing to not kill Ichigo doesn't make sense. He's said many times that he fights for his friends, not the Soul Society. I suppose that shows how little they knew him when they set all this up, but still.

You're a good writer. No problems with grammar or anything like that. The story itself just puts me off for whatever reason. Still, I'll follow it to see where it goes.

soifon killed inoue and you let her live...WTF
you should abandon this story, it sucks from start

Before I start the fict I would just like to say that the whole Unohana was the first Kenpanchi thing was pretty clear before the post Aizen thing so taking that out isn't really necessary, the other things I have no problem what so ever with.

But judging by the length of the story it seems good and I can't wait to start reading.

amazing start to this story! we need more hollow Ichigo stories like this! not just him accessing the powers, but actually being one. hope to see More!

I like the start of this story a lot already. I've seen Ichigo becomesa hollow storys before. But those almost always involve him being killed as a kid or the night he supposed to become a soul reaper. This is very nice twist on it all and look forward to seeing more.