Ooh, good fight-scene! Now the action is up, and I am totally rooting for Timmy to find her. I do think it is a bit counterproductive for the villains to tell her what their plan is, but I understand that you need to have something happen.

I'm not exactly sure how well Tecna knows Timmy at this point, so I'm surprised she knows that he's coming to save her. I thought she would be in despair. With that said, I think it's really sweet that she has such faith in him. She trusts him completely, which is such a nice sentiment, and something that we all want to feel towards someone special in our lives.

I think it was a bit too sudden for Timmy to throw away his career for Tecna. I thought he'd still continue his career, but take care of her. This ties back to what I said before about showing and not telling - things will be much less abrupt if you explain things through scenes rather than narration.

I do like how supportive the other women were of Tecna, though. It seemed a bit odd how Timmy talked about her as if she wasn't there, but I understand that communication is a problem for her. I wish we could get more insight into what Tecna is feeling, though. Does she unequivocally trust Timmy, or does she have some reservations? Even if she can't talk, or you don't want to write from her POV, we can still see into her mind through her actions.

Can't wait to see the showdown between Timmy and the wizards.

I think it's really sweet that the kiss made Timmy bond with Tecna. I can imagine that Timmy is going to face off against Valtor in this story. Though as they're scientists, not warriors, I don't know what they'll do. I wonder if the other Winx will make an appearance.

This is so beautiful.. It feels fresh, new, captivating. Can't wait to read more.