Reviews for Remnants Venomous Spider
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12
So basically an OC with Narutos name. Tf is thevppint in losing his memories like that.
dingo-822 chapter 3 . 7/14
I take it this is going to be a full-on marvel crossover where RWBY characters become Marvel counterparts?
luciano chapter 3 . 7/9
buen cap
Guest chapter 3 . 7/4
Will Naruto/Venom develop a addiction for chocolate?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4
The story is quite interesting but this first chapter feels so rushed, not a bad thing but I think it could be better
Guest chapter 3 . 7/3
I thought for sure Naruto's semblance would be negative emotion sensing to help sniff out any villains wherever he was, hopefully Kurama will help him with that at some point.
Could not help but notice that his alternative smaller suit did not give him Venoms deep sinister from the first was that intentional?
Even thought it will defiantly cause trouble down the line i'm looking forward to seeing Salem and Ozma reaction to Naruto's new appearance.
Speaking of appearances is Wendy Shnee based on Wendy Marvell and her Edolas outfit?
With all these marvel characters and references I wonder if Naruto(who literally avenges the innocent) will make his own avengers group later.
Also how about giving Venom a Dragon form Like the brother gods but with kurama's power makeing it a grim tailed beat mode, Acnologia does look a bit similar to Venom right.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/2
Yo is this a naruto and rwby corssover or is it spider man venom style. I know your using marvel elements and thats fine and all but it feels like more marvel than naruto and rwby happening what do you plan to do with naruto? Fighting crime, going to a school, keeping to himself? Idk a random character coming out the works and calling themselves the goblin im not really to sure where you plan on going with this. Also since the venom consciousness will eventually fade will that affects narutos psyche you don't fall into the grim pool without any negative effects salem only survived because she was immortal its a literal pool that saps away life i guess fusing with a spider grim would help mitigate the death affect but it would still corrupt him not mention he is part grimm now a literal creature made of darkness. This only the third chapter so i should see where this story goes it has potential but currently it can go either way
Guest chapter 3 . 7/1
Naruto esta inspirado en la apariencia de add clase Diabolic Esper
Guest chapter 3 . 7/1
La aparición de Naruto está inspirando de add
Guest chapter 3 . 7/1
Great chapter and please update whenever you can. Also I have a suggestion for a story you could write. It's a Naruto and My Hero Academia crossover with a little bit of Batman with Naruto being one of the most popular vigilantes and member of the Bat Family the one and only Red Hood.
R reyes chapter 3 . 6/30
hmmmmnnnnnn.. interesting keep going also please be more original the hole first spiderman movie is a little nice touch but please no. also why naruto dint use his venom true form he cud have made short work of the goblin dude also please update the naruto and sonic one please
Guest chapter 3 . 6/30
Me encanto, ya quiero ver como se desarrolla la historia
helrio uzugaku chapter 3 . 7/2
Ok, this chapter was full of nostalgia. I grew up watching the spider man movie this chapter took parts from. So I enjoyed that.

I don't agree with killing off venom, I don't agree with him having a 'humanoid' form in the mindscape. Killing off venom seems like a waste, he's the source of potentially hilarious scenes as seen in the venom 2019 film. That form of venom would have added a lot more style to the story and depth. Especially if Naruto had a form of heads up about Salem from venom formerly being under her control and all.

It feels cheap to kill him off and use his powers. I don't think it would work the same way if venom's conciousness wasn't there. Controlling all of those strands of black DNA consciously and having to focus to hold the form together? Yeah, doesn't sound possible or feasible.

I really hope you didn't actually plan to go through with it.

As for venomous human form in the mindscape, I could understand if he had the form of a spider, like he did as a Grimm. But now that he's more malleable it doesn't make sense to have a solid form. Again, more inspiration from the 2019 film makes sense. He isn't restricted, unchained even, free to bend and twist as he pleases. I liked how the 2019 venom movie seemed MUCH more dynamic than others of the same franchise because venom was a seperate entity to his host. Capable of making seperate plans to aid his host and take down threats while his host did something else.

The motorcycle scene where Eddie was launched off the bike only for venom to reel him back onto it. A solid form just takes all of that away.
Shadic21 chapter 3 . 7/1
Good chapter, I want to see the next part.
hellfire45 chapter 3 . 7/1
Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and it is a surprise that Wendy is a character and I hope he won’t be to much like Spider-Man
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