Reviews for Archetypal
nobodyreallyimportant chapter 8 . 1h
Carol asks the dangerous questions.
biob1 chapter 8 . 5h
Interesting flash back. I am having fun reading this.
nuuo chapter 8 . 7h
Oh god, more filler. Know what, I don't even want to see Lincoln go to school now. Can we get Luan opening and closing the fridge several times making a sandwich next chapter? Maybe some Lola painting her nails? Lynn Sr. playing the cowbell?
Agonizing Turtle chapter 8 . 8h
Lincoln awkwardly hugging Leni for a few minutes excpecting something to happen... that's adorable.

can't imagine Lori very happy with Carol's implication tho that might change if something big happens that requires them to be juiced up by Lincoln
warprince2000 chapter 8 . 9h
Great chapter can’t wait to see what happens next
Guest chapter 7 . 7/28
A great story I loved reading very good, please continue.
Whitescorpion chapter 7 . 7/27
Love this chapter, I find it adorable how shy Lincoln acts in front of the girls, and how the girls react to his actions finding him sweet, and cute and wanting to smother him into submission with love and affection. ️️️️
Agonizing Turtle chapter 7 . 7/26
I found this story just by coincidence last week and I read it like six times already.

I'm loving it, the characters are so like themselves despite the change in their very nature, they remain like they are meant to be despite having superpowers.

Lincon's struggle is relatable, Leni's worries and developing feeling are touching and Leni's general cuteness is like a dose of sugar.

I love it
Aerkry chapter 7 . 7/25
Ahhh yes a very leni thing to do.. very excited for the next chapter as she is my favorite aannnnd lori... Stay well out there and will look forward to the next chapter
biob1 chapter 7 . 7/25
Next chapter should be very interesting I'm curious how leni's powers work.
warprince2000 chapter 7 . 7/25
Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)
IROCK108 chapter 7 . 7/25
Supa noice.
LoudCestBest chapter 7 . 7/25
Feed me moar! Thanks for the chapter.
copet chapter 7 . 7/25
Good chapter, and good exposition to some of the family shenanigans and the Magical-girl archetype. Also may have given a clue to Lola's archetype, though I'm not sure. It is interesting how you concentrate on Lincoln's POV telling us maybe his power really comes from things he ... "notice", maybe? Haha, good chapter. Good day to you!
Jeff chapter 7 . 7/25
Well, at least Lincoln knows better than to look at Leni while she's transforming in the future, those sequences can literally kill your eyesight without warning. It's adorable that Lola's trying to be like Leni, but her methods leave a lot to be desired. It just gets more telling with Lori's feelings for Lincoln with that hug and kiss on that same cheek that Carol kissed, things can only get more absurd with her jealousy.
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