so good. I feel bad for jayfeather though.

... Actually this is a really interesting one-shot. I love the idea of Jayfeather reincarnation endlessly... but ofc he probably doesn't. Great Work!

I like strawberries.

Also do you also picture a super aggressive cat that has a permanent snarl face when you read "Snarltooth?" LOL!

I really like reading about these Warrior dogs.

well I was kinda confoosed bu not bad lol. a bit too oc for me idk I guess Jayfeth would get a bit depressed from all the repetition. e.e not sure when the next time I check on this fandom BC I've started playing MC 24/7 and since there aren't long car rides to sports I don't really read as much. (also I've been zooming via favorites instead of fandoms so strangely enough I'm reading volleyball anime stuff lol)

I know this is supposed to be a one-shot, but the storyline and everything is just so good AHHHHH continueeeee!

Good job! :D

This is such a beautiful piece of work! How everything was approached you could understand it completely, while not being so overwhelmed with the information. Also, I know you said this would be a one-shot, but would you possibly continue this book? I really would love to see Batpaw's life and how he still copes training under Snarltooth.

I love batkit he is so cutw