Wow, I think I like this chapter better than the last! Not that the first chapter was bad by any means, but this one certainly had a lot more character interactions going on. This story’s interpretation of Prowl’s character (personally, he comes off as slightly more cocky than the usual personification of “calm, collected and has a stick up his aft”) is interesting, but you know what? I like it. I also adore the interaction between Elita and Bee, it’s cute

Will be dropping another review soon, so see you then!

Hello, hello! I stumbled across this fic and decided to give it a read, and I’m already hooked! I’m always a sucker for the “How did they meet” stories, and I can see a whole lot of familiar faces and names in the first chapter alone.

I couldn’t see any SPaG mistakes so far, so nothing much to say for critiques. I’ll be dropping another review soon, so see you then!

Please, please, Lita, kill him, don't you see that he is a decepticon? If you show him mercy, they will never do it and, thank goodness, he ended up dead because I was already frightening with the little ones,

Jojojo giving glances of those lovers XD, hmmm of course Optimus only Bee stuck to her xd, because if you always end up next to her and give her adoration glances I think that the two of them kept silent before her XD, the glances of others towards OP de , we know, there are no secrets xd.

I loved this chapter especially as they bother Elita and Optimus her friends a little hehehe.

Great chapter, can't wait for the next part!

So Prowl will be the one who receives the beating of Elita well because he is very worthy as an opponent, no Elita, let's not be cowed before starting that it does not go with you, you are or you will be the couple of Optimus and we both save that there is no more worthy woman for you, you are a girl who kicks the butt of bad guys so do us the favor of showing why men should take care of women and not treat us with contempt.

hmmm this Prowl of which universe you based yourself, because the one that I like is not arrogant nor does he take things for granted, let alone undermine the enemy XD, awwww Bumblebee the one that with only his puppy dog look and way of winning wins our hearts ( and see that he is not my favorite character or he is in my highest top (it could be said xd), although I have the feeling that Bee will be a great help when joining Optimus and Elita xd, it is that you can see that he has already made Elita fall for the ahahaha.

Optimus and Elita already shut up, as the song says and they sat under the tree and held hands or something XD I think.

Well, I still do not like the couple of OP X Elita One for personal reasons and partly because OP together with another who will not go into detail xd, but I always like to read how the authors do to put this couple together that the canon never I develop T_T (what a waste in my opinion to put something that they will not develop) or in which stories end together and I must say that this captivated me not only the title but as a start and I will gladly follow it.

And yes, gentlemen, come on, Elita, do not let yourself be trampled, nobody deserves that, even the weakest and smallest can win.