man it's a very good plot and more original than all the others, I'll reat the next chapter!

Fucking loved it write more stories

The story developed really well around Percy and Artemis, and was a great read, but I feel like there are some problems/ loose ends that you might want to consider if you ever write a sequel or even for other stories you might write.

Firstly, a large problem for me is that Annabeth took a HUGE back seat in the story. I know it's literally been 8000 years for Percy, but how do his friends react to this new revelation? There have to be certain repercussions that aren't addressed in the story. Thalia's role was addressed pretty well, but Grover isn't, and nor is RED's role in your universe.

How does the prophecy of Seven work, then? Gaea can't rise again, so the prophecy is basically broken, isn't it? I suppose being the God of Fate can influence it, but it is a Great Prophecy. It's got a Deus Ex Machina feel to it I don't really like.

I'm aware it's probably due to some kind of impatience to finish the story, but a good writer is often patient. I really like your writings and hope to see more of them soon.

Why? This is the third time I’m reading your story. Why is it so good? Stupid Guest who said your story was trash. Probably he was a diehard Percabeth fan. One of the best PERTEMIS fics I’ve read. Thank you for gifting us the with this work

I so wish for a sequel! this was amazing thanks a lot for this story!

Good story

the story was great! a little bit of a quick ending, but still good! plz sequal

XD

you are a great writer and I hope you write more in the future

You wrapped up this story pretty nicely. Great job on that! I can actually see there being a sequel for this story (even tho I am sure you aren't planning on doing that) since there was a third titan war in the future/Percy's past. Anyways, I hope that all of your Harry Potter stories go well for you (I haven't read the books and I am pretty sure a majority of the Harry Potter fanfics are based upon the books, so I won't read any Harry Potter fanfics until I have actually read the whole series). Have a nice day!

-ShadowThanatos

Could you please do a sequel focusing on other characters this time? No offense, but your writing style seems centered around a few strong and well-developed protagonists, and a few supporting characters, and all but ignore the rest of the characters. (E.g. Annabeth's role was explained, but we don't know what happened to the rest of the Seven. Also, how does Annabeth feel about Percy now, after his rather abrasive, to be honest, behaviour to Annabeth on their trip to get Leo? Etc. etc.) How does Annabeth react to this sudden shift in his affections? What does Piper do? Where are the rest of the Seven and what are they doing? How does Percy explain himself to a) The camps b) The Seven? Do Rachel and Annabeth do anything at all upon witnessing Percy blatantly ignore them romantically?
However, the plot is engaging and the developed characters(Percy, Artemis) are portrayed in a slightly realistic manner (let's face it, Artemis is way to hardcore about her vow to behave like that) but this is fanfic, so... its possible. The way you portray their whirlwind romance is not to my personal liking (just not realistic), but written well and kind of cute. (I can almost feel Artemis glaring at me from Olympus...) The grammar and spelling are perfect (my definition, at least, which is not very perfect) and the surroundings and backstory are vividly described.
Overall, this is a wonderful and adorably fluffy story (yep, the bow is drawn and there's an arrow nocked and aimed at my head now. Goodbye, cruel world!) and I really enjoyed it.

Beautiful story

I actually loved this story thank you for the experience made me laugh and smile. Something I haven’t done in a while. I love this ship

This has been one of my favorite Pertemis stories that I’ve ever read. You didn’t rush it at all and it was so smooth. I hope you write more Percy Jackson stories.

The way you integrated your reason for switching Zoe’s English was quite amusing. I enjoyed reading that part.

End of a great story...mind blown away by a great story line.

excellent chapter, i hope to see a sequel