Reviews for Violet Potter, Dark Lady
Boop bep chapter 1 . 9/10
odd paced but a damn good ride, pls have violet entirely fuck over the dursley tho no 8 y/o should flinch at a word
IcyDoom chapter 18 . 8/10
Per the treaty that was signed at the end of ww2 Japan was only allowed to have a military force for national defense, hence why it is called the Japanese Self Defense Force (JSDF).
SlytherinQueenLucretia chapter 18 . 8/10
Aw thank you for picking my suggestion!

As I’ve said before, I really do like this story.

Dunno what options best, but think I’m leaning towards option 3
minerdude chapter 16 . 7/30
Good story, since I live between Annapolis and DC, may I say I welcome our new Cythereans overlords.
Alyssa Sunborn chapter 15 . 7/27
Great story, really love where this is going. For a name of the city, New Avalon or Avalon would be a good choice. Or something that has to do with aphrodite and the greek pantheon. Or something completely else. After all its your story.
dtabasco chapter 15 . 7/27
Absolutely love the story so far. As for a more regal name she can take up the name Le Fey since it came up on her inheritance test. For the city she could go with Avalon. Both are well known in muggle mythology
ShadowKnight000 chapter 2 . 7/27
Good story so far, I was a bit sceptical about this at first and nearly didn't read it, I am glad you are staying away from sexual things when she is young, it makes this story actually readable :)
SlytherinQueenLucretia chapter 15 . 7/27
I really do love this!

Ideas:
Surname:Regina as Latin for Queen, or Venus (Roman Aphrodite).
City: Victoria -Latin for Victory, afraid I cannot think other names
IcyDoom chapter 15 . 7/27
I'd say Regina (queen in Latin) could work as a last name, maybe Cytherea (another name for Aphrodite) for the name of the empire and lastly Castellum (means the fort) for the capital.
HEROTYTY13 chapter 14 . 7/25
I'm loving this can't wait for the rest
BJACKSON244 chapter 13 . 7/19
I am enjoying the story so far and I look forward to how it progresses.
magitech chapter 13 . 7/18
Violet is moving just a bit fast. Given her ability to lend her powers to her servants she could have had all those Aurors obeying her in a few months. Waste not, want not.

Hard to think of a suitable partner for Violet, in canon JK was mainly focused on her all knowing and powerful self insert Granger.
magitech chapter 12 . 7/18
You had Dumbledore arrested in chapter 11 but you have him here twice, calling Violet into his office and accusing her of the petrification's and at the end announcing the Tri Wizard.
And you had Narcissa as Hogwarts Head so Dumbles shouldn't be here.
magitech chapter 11 . 7/18
Fast and inn the open is the way to deal with Dumbledore as his greatest power is the whisper campaign of 'going dark' he starts if someone doesn't instantly obey him.

Not sure if pure bloods would be able to infiltrate muggle military and governments, they are either too stupid or ignorant of muggle society.

I believe Britain's special forces are
The Royal Marine commando
The S.A.S.
Paratroopers
There are probably others but this is off the top of my head.
Mr-popo98 chapter 10 . 7/13
I think the reason so few have voted on your poll is that you have to be on desktop mode or pc to vote on it. Most people likely use a tablet or mobile to read fics. Live the chapter
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