Reviews for Aparecium
SusanMarieS chapter 14 . 8/12
loved it. thank you
SusanMarieS chapter 6 . 8/12
the age change explains the timeline discrepancies. wonderful story so far. thank you
lateVMlover chapter 9 . 8/8
I don't think I have ever read a story with such an entertaining kid. I loved this a lot.
Lost n Looney chapter 14 . 8/8
Thank you for writing characters who solved their problems through communication. It was refreshing, all I really enjoyed your book and i will definitely be looking into your other works.
HarryPGinnyW4eva chapter 14 . 8/4
That was fun and lovely and adorable! Thank you, HG4eva
Brizriina chapter 14 . 7/30
I loved this story, and Liam is adorable! Thanks for sharing!
cagzclarine chapter 14 . 7/28
Totalement adorable ! La romance entre Draco et Hermione est fondante et le personnage de Liam est absolument craquant, parvenant même à séduire son grand-père ;-). J'adore sa phrase finale. Merci pour ce moment moelleux.
Dreamshards8 chapter 14 . 7/26
I truly enjoyed this story. Liam was a joy to read especially and Draco stepping up was fantastic. Nicely done.
Dreamshards8 chapter 13 . 7/25
What a heart warming chapter! I grinned like a schoolgirl when Lucius kissed his wife.
Dreamshards8 chapter 5 . 7/24
Awww that was touching. I had a pretty ruff birth my son so her story made me tear up. I'm glad to see them getting along on this chapter.
Dreamshards8 chapter 4 . 7/24
Liam's mannerisms are almost too much, you really did a great job writing him.
Dreamshards8 chapter 3 . 7/24
Okay Hermione did mess up in a sense, though her concerns were still valid. Draco has a right time be upset with her, Liam as well. Still, for Draco to just come in and start trying to control things like where Liam goes to school makes me a little angry. He has only known about Liam for a day. I mean sure there should be some compromise but geez.
Dreamshards8 chapter 2 . 7/24
That's one way to get back at a cheating ex, lmao.
stelladarling chapter 9 . 7/23
In the library scene, the verb tenses switch to present suddenly, and then alternate for s bit between past and present. It's a very good scene otherwise.
stelladarling chapter 2 . 7/23
I enjoyed the flashback. It's well placed in the story, and it's well written!
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