Reviews for THE WHITE FOX
CrazyBugz chapter 1 . 7/23
nice start man can't wait to see more
Narudevilfan chapter 1 . 6/29
Needs some grammar work, but is otherwise not bad.
TigrezzTail chapter 1 . 6/5
Hm, so are they manipulating him further for their own benefit, or because they truly care for him? I'm excited to see how it goes!
thor94 chapter 1 . 5/21
also obviously, have naruto claim his whole legacy until the last ryo and jutsu (with anything missing being entirely refunded by the criminal thieves themselves and konoha own Treasury cash.
An ungrateful village shouldn't benefit the work and money from a family and clan they betrayed and dishonored in the worst way possible. naruto should remove all his family wealth and asset out of konoha reach (and as owner, destroy everything he can't move)
Nishigandha chapter 1 . 5/21
It's actually a good story work hard...
Harsiddhi deshmu chapter 1 . 5/21
You should concentrate on the spelling mistake you make and also your sentence formation.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21
Good
anarion87 chapter 1 . 5/22
nice story so far
biginferno chapter 1 . 5/21
interesting start are you planning to pair him with a strong Kunoichi make it hurt Konoha really badly by having him marry a foreign kunoichi such as Samui or Temari or both I would suggest Tayuya but I assume she's dead but if she survives her,Samui and Temari if you go for multiple wives that would stick it to Konoha especially if he has a bloodline or something they really want because with those 3 Kumo, Suna and Tayuya benefit but Konoha does not since they banished him and have Suna, Kumo, Snow, Wave, etc break ties off with Konoha make it hurt them
thor94 chapter 1 . 5/21
just one answer: have naruto make konoha pay hard its betrayal without any mercy (like have naruto tell all the countries he saved what konoha did to him, pay the remain money they owe to the village and break all tie and trade with them)