Reviews for Pyre
Guest chapter 24 . 7/24
Oh my gosh please let tris and Tobias adopt that baby! Please! Keep up the great work can’t wait for the next chapter! Also, URIAH CAN NOT DIE THAT BABY NEEDS HIS UNCLE URI!
dianesnyder chapter 24 . 7/22
Yes, that was an interesting type of victory, if you can call it that. Evelyn giving herself the memory serum? Guess that shouldn't surprise any of us (if she's not faking it). And the chapter ending...that was a surprise.
Guest chapter 24 . 7/21
Sighsssss!... What an intense chapter, awesome like all you had done, well let's wait and see what Tobias is going to say when he find out he is a DAD.!
Thank youuuu!...you are incredible!
dianesnyder chapter 23 . 7/20
LOVE IT: "Too often do people forget that just because someone is loved, does not mean they love themselves." So true!
dianesnyder chapter 22 . 7/19
Great chapter! The wedding was very dauntless. I would have had a few close friends there, but that's not the T&T way. I have to agree with them, don't think I would have wanted to cut each other like the normal thing they do, but doing something dauntless seems appropriate.
dianesnyder chapter 21 . 7/17
Good chapter. And yes it was a Tobias proposal. You're right, nothing is normal for them, so why should the proposal? Although the blah, blah, blah stuff would have been nice, too!
dianesnyder chapter 20 . 7/14
Wow - Tori was really out for vengeance. She expected everyone else to go out & fight, but she didn't even bother to go herself? Guess she doesn't believe in leading by example.
Guest chapter 23 . 7/14
I loved this chapter!
Guest chapter 23 . 7/13
If this book ends in another cliffhanger, I swear to God. I'm just kidding, I love it!
Guest chapter 23 . 7/13
Wowwww , love this chapter ,I can't wait for the other one and see what you had planning you are terrific.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/11
This, once again, is an amazing chapter. Can't wait to read more!
Rs610 chapter 21 . 7/11
I loved the proposal - so actual Tobias and less overt sappy - perfect
Guest chapter 22 . 7/10
BEAUTIFUL!...Thank you for such amazing chapter, a perfect dauntless wedding.
Sensitivity8 chapter 22 . 7/10
I'm so stressed about how they are going to win this war, but my goodness the wedding was perfect for them. This chapter was everything from Tobais comforting her after her panic attack,to the wedding and them reflecting on the wedding. Amazing!
Guest chapter 21 . 7/9
Of course you did it again and again because according to their characters the proposal was perfect .
I love this chapter ,well you never disappointed me you are SO good and this story it's beyond everything that means good. Thank you.
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