| Reviews for Promise for Treason |
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Grimlord31 chapter 18 . 8/18 I'm sorry but there's NO WAY that Palpatine would've fallen for that! First of all, wouldn't he have known about the trick after probing Pallas' mind? Second of all, even if you could excuse my previous point, wouldn't he have at least suspected that he was being recorded? It's one of the oldest tricks in the book! There's a reason that he's lasted so long without being discovered. And third of all, why would he just inexplicably break character like that just because ONE thing didn't go according to plan? |
Secret chapter 16 . 8/13 I love it poor skyguy though fake deaths well that would suck but I love it honestly nor were I thought it was going whatsoever |
Triglavian chapter 20 . 7/28 People we need a miracle to get a sequel of this Because this is some sort of film material right here. |
DuckBoi chapter 20 . 7/27 All I can say is that I felt happy myself, reading this story! Never a dull moment in Star Wars, especially the Clone Wars. By the way, I totally caught that Dark side joke, you sly dog, you. Hmm, sequel material? That’s a tough one. I admit that I’m a fan of the much shorter sequel series: Rebels, but that, of course, revolves around the empire actually happening. You could do something like that but with your own twist, and I always enjoy those family moments. Like I said, it’s been a heck of a ride, DuckBoi, signing off! |
MattMatrix chapter 20 . 7/26 Dear god, Ares will be the best uncle the galaxy has ever seen. But one think I don't understand is the ending. Did Sidious know that Anakin would get burned to a crisp or was he going to turn him into a machine anyway?11 |
DojoYoyo chapter 20 . 7/25 Ahaha! This is one of a kind! Pallas and Lux had a friendly conversation... Ares and Ahsoka looked after Luke and Leia. Then we have Obi-Wan, Pallas and Anakin witnessing Darth Vader's suit... All shattered by Anakin and I... Freaking... Love it! |
Hghg chapter 20 . 7/24 PS maul verdient aber Respekt er hat in kurzer Zeit eine arme aufgebaut und ein planeten eingenommen |
Hghg chapter 20 . 7/24 Ich mag denn epilog und es ist schön zu sehen das am Ende doch alle glücklich sind Na dann hoffe ich mal das irgendwann wieder ihr eine ahsoka x oc ff kommt oder von einer anderen serie bin gespannt ein schönes Wochenende noch |
rainfallMyth chapter 20 . 7/24 Ahsoka and Ares taking care of Luke and leia is one of the most adorable things ever. |
Xxnike575xX chapter 20 . 7/24 My friend! My wonderful friend! You have added the cherry on top for your story! This national treasure you have crafted delicately and so precisely that a sequel might damage it! Everything has fallen in perfect shape, all enemies delt with an executed, all plans discovered and foiled, relationships build or mended, peace finally and truly achieved. This story my friend has hits its zenith, an I am proud to have seen it! With all that my friend I must bid Adieu! I shall revisit this story and enjoy it another time in a couple of months. That said, fair well my friend and thank you for this story! -Nickey (the lurker who was called out) |
TheClowningPrince chapter 20 . 7/24 Loved every moment of it. You have done a wonderful job! |
EnderGhost1225 chapter 19 . 7/22 This was perhaps the best star wars story I've found so far. Few have a competition for that place in my eyes. |
Xxnike575xX chapter 19 . 7/20 You know, I’m pretty sure you stole this... STOLEN FROM AN ART MUSEUM! Like holy crap you put an end to all unanswered questions. Some of the questions I had in last chapter were brought up in this one. Like if Lux would kill Pallas or seek out revenge. Then BOOM, turns out he does. A mind reader you are good person. I feel so content with how it ends. There is no major questions left unanswered or cliffhanger or anything. An let me tell you some authors do tent to leave those at the end of there story and my god do I die inside! But with this I feel so.. ALIVE! Happy, even beyond that because I’ve had a dopey smile on my face since finishing this fic. The best part for me was lux an Pallas. I knew as soon as Anakin left something bad was gonna happen, tho I fully expected Nute Gunray to be the culprit. I couldn’t ask for a sequel for this, in my opinion it would be hard to keep hold of both the events in this story and event in a new one. Tho I am curious on how Anakin and Padama will be(if she dies in childbirth or not), if lux and Pallas will actually work together (if Pallas still has fillings for him or not). Those are really the only two questions I wouldn’t mind answered. I could piece my own answers but I’d like to know how you’d have them end. But with that let me thank you, THANK YOU. It has been an absolute pleasure reading this and getting to see it close. Without a doubt one of the best Star Wars stories on here. Thank you, for the countless hours of entertainment and joy. Nicky out! |
DojoYoyo chapter 19 . 7/20 This is... The happiest days... Of my life... Gah! It is amazing, ah correction, it is incredible! The war is over! The clones lived and the battle droids... Lived! |
TheChamp123 chapter 19 . 7/20 I’m extremely satisfied. I was freaking out there for a minute like holy shit, what’s gonna happen? Your gonna red wedding me man! Happy with the way it ended. Can’t wait to see your next work. Catch you in the Dms!. |