Reviews for The Skeleton Prince
ThePizzadude93 chapter 1 . 7/19
Interesting idea. But the execution is seriously lacking. I know for a fact that you can do a whole lot better with this concept. One thing that is bugging me is how do the people of Shuggazoom see Chiro as a "monster" for simply being the Chosen One of the Power Primate? That makes no absolute sense, since the people of the city have treated Chiro with nothing but the utmost form of respect and admiration. In hindsight, this "story" feels very rushed, is far too short, and also mostly consists of dialogue and not enough narrative description.