OOOM! vole vole vole vole ... OOOM! vole vole vole vole ...

I *think* it's a dramatic beat.

Loved the card!

what is it with this lower bar punctuation? never seen it used like this nor is it supposed to

i have no idea what crossover this is and you are being obstinately vague which is def not helping. like i said weird

snape saying no? has he forgotten about the prophecy.

rather odd story so far

you are quite bad at discribing a scene

the mussles of his arm shook, already tired from the lang walk... does harry walk on his hands or something?

Owl animagus would make a great spy

Fun chapter!

Though there is a minor continuity error. The first half of the chapter refers to the trial as taking place on Halloween 93. The second half (Umbridge) refers to the date as August 30th

Well that’s a hook!

Peter is not the pushover everyone thinks he is. Love the new school and how Dumbledore does not understand the students at all.

So Goblin is Klingon? Or rather Klingon is Goblin. Marc Okrand was clearly a squib, and knew the Goblin language. He saw the similarity to the words James Doohan had invented for 'The Trouble with Tribbles' and decided to re-cycle it.

Hope to see more of this story.

Klingon?

I am loving this. Found it through Rorschach's Blot Top of teh Mark community and I must say it is well chosen. Looking forward to more.

It’s written well but I feel the characters have no depth to them ...I find myself wondering why I should care about them an the story is disjointed an I’m not sure where it’s taking me...I don’t want to be harsh but it seems like the bulk of the story is still in your head, and I’m just getting snippets of something great...

I find this confusing, how in the heck does the Pureblood British Wizarding World think they can meddle in the affairs of the United States let alone the North American Magical Communities? They are not part of the ICW nor they are part of the Cult of Dumbledore.

Goblins as Klingons? Interesting... lol

Good Show...