Loving the progression. Keep up the good work...
... Archangel Writings

great chapter! i loved this episode from the show, i am excited to see what you do differently!

I loved how you tied the clones into this. I agree that the Kaminoans couldn't have taken away all of their stress, since we see them showing fear, anger, and real, raw emotion towards battle. Heck, we even saw Rex having a PTSD type flashback in The Last Mission during Rebels. I hope Ahsoka gets better soon!

Oof. I mean, Wolffe is right, but I don't think that was something he needed to bring up to her just now. Now she'll feel even more guilty...
Everyone always thinks C-3P0 is some kind of god haha

Awww! I love Beady! Hopefully a therapy lizard will make her feel better! And I love how Ahsoka gets to be in the Mercy Mission episode!:)

Chapter 7:
Yes yes yes medication! SHES HEALING! This chapter was my favourite so far. Each new one is better than the last! My only complaint is that the chapters are too short!

ErinKenobi

Chapter 6:
Yay! I’m glad Ahsoka is healing! And Anakin is trying his best hahaha. I kind of like Obi-Wan as her master. I always wondered what that would have been like. I’m sooooo happy you’re letting Ahsoka feel better minus the occasional flashback. I can’t wait until she’s back on the field!

ErinKenobi

A Jedi liking a ysalamiri is seriously worrying to my mind.

Wow! I just read this for the first time, and I couldn’t stop. I read it all the way through, and It’s great! Beady is so cute, and I’m glad Rex is doing better, I hope Ahsoka will get to talk to Fives soon, and that he won’t be mad :)
Great story!
-Kara

I've go a bad feeling about the medication… I get the feeling it'll make it worse.
I like how she gets a nightlight and Beady :)

:3 My heart is melting!

This is very impressive and I love how you describe Ahsokas ordeal. I can't wait to see how Anakin reacts when he finds out how much everything is really affecting Ahsoka.

What?! I didn't think Anakin was making it worse… poor him. He's gonna be drowning in guilt :( And poor Ahsoka.

Chapter 5:
Oh my god. Just WoW! I’m yet again impressed by your incredible writing style and superb creativity. I love how not 2 minutes after I posted a review willing for Padmé to come try and help Ahsoka she did. And I never would have guessed she would be temporarily reassigned to Obi-Wan. Nothing at all would have made this chapter better. I will be dying of anticipation for the next chapter to come out. Have an amazing day!

ErinKenobi

Chapter 4:
OK, favourite chapter yet! Ahsoka in a clone bar fighting with fives? This is exactly the sort of thing I wish LucasFilm would animate. I’m sooooo excited to read the next chapter since it was sort of left on a cliffhanger. Except I can’t complain since I do that too XD. Great job on this one! I’m so glad you brought out everyone’s favourite ARC trooper to play. To say the least this chapter definitely satisfied my need for Star Wars today hahaha. And you know what else. THIS AMAZING CONCEPT. Creativity is being radiated out of your typing. Personally I would have liked this chapter a bit more if fives had been more sensitive to her, but fantastic nonetheless! Please please please bring out our favourite senator! Padmé helping Ahsoka would be so dang cute!

ErinKenobi