Reviews for Albedos Quirky Journey
Another reader chapter 5 . 7/21
Well, it will be a great pleasure to help you with your story, I feel that it is a bit undervalued since it is not about ben and ships (at least for now in what I see) therefore they do not see it much or want to comment on it. I would also like to tell you that my language is more Spanish than anything and English is not very good for me but I will do my best.

And regarding the chapter I feel that something is missing, I just don't know what it is ... I also feel that you were right in what you said before about what Albedo heard about the combat between OFA and AFO
Humatrix-X-24 chapter 1 . 6/28
While I have only read so far I can tell this story has potential. Though I wouldn’t consider myself a fan as I personally don’t like the red Galvan, his pompous attitude and disrespect to other species happens to be the part I dislike most. Though I will say to others that they should check this story out in order to expand their horizons.
Another reader chapter 4 . 6/14
Well I liked the chapter and I am with you regarding the words or reactions that Albedo would have had before the fight of All might against AFO, he really is not a person who would have contributed much in that field. and that would have been really forced and awkward to read.

Already going to the beginning of the chapter I like that albedo go to the point, killing Bakugou would have been in fact a great blow to the community of Japan and heroes in general (eye I do not hate Bakugoe seems to me a really developed character of good way) now I want to see what kinds of theories the heroes will do regarding that it has a different albedo that does not make it susceptible to the gift of Aizawa.

And I would love to know the type of reactions they will get if they come to realize that he is just a child hahaha, what thoughts would they have about him now? something really good to read.

ps: I think once you asked for help or a hand, I would be happy to help you and even though I still consider myself a practitioner or amateur in these things I will be happy to help you
Another reader chapter 1 . 5/27
fue un buen capitulo,aunque de nuevo lo senti un poco apresurado pero creo que es mas cosa mia que tuya. En lo que respecta al capitulo ahora tengo algunas dudas,como por ejemplo la manera en que AFO dio con albedo y que lo reclutara o como este se enfrento a Montain lady en su forma de gigante con muy grande y tuvo que ir supremo contra ella.

ahora me pregunto como pasara desapercibido que un joven adolescente americano(no tanto)como albedo sin ir a la escuela y el hecho de que no tenga tutores legales...estoy seguro que habria problemas legales en eso aunque en japon puede que esto sea normal.
It was a good chapter, although again I felt a little rushed but I think it's more my thing than yours. With regard to the chapter, I now have some doubts, such as the way in which AFO found Albedo and recruited him or how he confronted Montain lady in his form of giant with very large and had to go supreme against her.

Now I wonder how it would go unnoticed that a young American teenager (not so much) as an albedo without going to school and the fact that he does not have legal guardians ... I am sure there would be legal problems in that although in Japan this may be normal .
Ms.tiger chapter 2 . 5/26
Hey, your fanfic no longer appears in the crossover search engine ... did you abandon it? I hope this is not the case as soon as you have two chapters and I really like the idea you have.
Dead-within chapter 2 . 5/24
I honestly hope you don't put a ship. It's great without it.
Another reader chapter 2 . 5/22
postscript: at what time in the history of bnha are we ?, hopefully we are not at the sports festival because hearing from him in all crossover fanfic begins to make my ears bleed xD

it's not that I hate the bow, it just seems good to me and the fact that they change it seems blasphemous to that bow.
Another reader chapter 2 . 5/22
I am very glad that my comment was taken into account, I can understand the reason for the ships but that is something that must be done very very slowly, the truth is, if a character never wanted to have a romantic interest, making him want it suddenly is something forced but not if it is carried slowly.

I like that you do not put it to AU almost in all the fanfics it is about putting in force the fact that the character of the x universe has to be there, the world of bnha is large and full of characters so there is no need for get him into school or anything like that, so I really appreciate you being different.

Another thing to deal with would be the speed with which you carry things ... it would be good if you were slower in the situations and you would not go so fast to the action ... the rest all well so have a good night.
Another Reader chapter 1 . 5/20
if i am honest i agree with the first comment i dont see a pairing of albedo with someone not only due to the fact that it seems unnecessary to me but that in the same series albedo was never interested in having a partner and the fact that he wants to like that so it seems something very out of character, but I like the idea you have I hope to see more of the fanfic since most of the crossovers are deku having the omnitrix and this is new, especially I also want to see what would be your justification for albedo to join AU or try to be a hero ... because being honest with how smart he is, I don't see him needing to be in a class since he himself with the powers he has has no need to follow the rules or To get money, you could for example become a diamond or stone and sell parts of them and you would get a lot of money.

my comment is long but it is so because I have hopes for this fanfic and I hope not to be disappointed or anything like that
Amit Barabi chapter 1 . 5/20
maybe Mei because she is the smartest in the list you wrote
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18
I honestly don't want a ship I rather see a no romance story, and I like the plot it's definitely going to be an interesting story.