Well it looks like you have a plan on where you’re taking this, and all I’ve got to say is keep the ball rolling. Chapter was pretty good for the set up and eager to see more. Also, I’m slightly concerned about that fact that ‘normal’ people exist in this world. Nothing bad about it, just wondering if it will impact the story.

I’m interested in where this is going. You’ve got me hooked on the end of each sentence.