This is objectively awesome. When’s the next update?

fuck you shit weak harry

Ohhh this is really good, I hope you continue it.

Wow, bricks and mortar is the greatest analogy I've ever heard for the Speed Force and the Universes, well done!

I'm confused about Harry here. Has he gone nuts or something?

I haven't minded his interaction with Alex. Looking at it and seeing that he is supposedly paired with Lena, that doesn't make sense yet. Alex has been rather demanding and being his only friend, he has given in each time.

I hate to say it, but he'd be much better off just disappearing from their lives. They screw up, it's on them.

They've gotten to used to him being a nice guy. They've forgotten that he isn't merely wizard Harry. The Death thing is far more important and the Reapers are a rather minor part of that.

Really, Kara shouldn't have been brought back to life. She was killed due to attacking Death. She didn't mean it as such, but Death and his Reapers took the action as such. What sort of moron is J'onn that he doesn't get that? If they tried anything against Harry, his Reapers could easily end everyone on the planet before they could blink.

Harry doesn't have a clue how much of that is automatic reflexive defensives. J'onn is just willfully blind to it. He thinks that just because Harry created some Reapers that Harry as Death isn't needed or that they won't run amock or to fight for him if anyone tried to harm him.

J'onn if you really thought to try it, your entire department and anyone remotely connected to it would be dead and Harry wouldn't be able to bring anyone of them back.

Lena gets it. I'd love for her to try to kick J'onn off the planet as a threat to Earth. You don't piss off Death. You can be friendly with him, get to know him, but don't demand things like its your right. Eye Rolls. They don't get it. His 3 favors may have been the most he was able to bend the rules for Alex.

They've only got one more left. I sort of hope that they waste it and don't see him any more.

This started off o.k., but the more demanding the locals became the less I was happy about it. Harry was trying to bend the rules as much as he was allowed, but they just don't get it or like the concept.

I can't wait until Harry gets fed up and just stays on one of those other Earths.

shit heads think they could kill death even if there were hundreds of thousands of kara they still wouldnt be able to do shit thats like Captain America deciding he is gonna kill the living tribunal laughable.

I love that even Death has no control over his own essence. If one tries to attack Death they must understand they simply seek their own death. Great work. Please keep writing.

I literally just stumbled on to this fic... You literally had me hooked from the first word of Chapter 1 to the end note right now... This is a concept no one has ever seen, read, or even thought of. Its genuinely unique and absolutely like Harry. Though I am of the mind that Harry and Alex would make the better ship... but I can see how Lena fits the mold too. Still... eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Kill Alex, J’onn and Kara. Especially Kara. I want that bitch to suffer :)

This is incredibly annoying to read.

More please

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

I was really enjoying this story. Now I’m disappointed and feeling like I wasted my time.

Harry missed game night due to outside interference, and Alex is upset. More so because he wouldn’t have missed it if he hadn’t put it off until later and required time travel(which he uses all the time in his day to day life anyway, so it wasn’t out of the norm). How is she surprised that he put it off, when he didn’t want to go anyway since he didn’t want to deal with Kara(understandable since she never treats him well anyway).

Or is she upset that he implied that he thought board games were ‘stupid’ or ‘immature’? She’s holding a grudge for that?

Now Kara physically grabs him. She doesn’t seem to have any problem using her power to get her way here. Yanking on him. Is anyone surprised that the reaper reacted as it did. Alex shouldn’t be. She expected that would happen if anyone threatened him. He put her back together again.

I don’t like Kara, I no longer like Alex. It seems like no one but Harry can do any wrong. It just occurred to me that this reminds me of a bashing story where certain (usually Dumbledore and the Ministry) characters condemn Harry for all kinds of stupid things in an effort to control or get rid of him. Now this lot are trying to get rid of him, trying to kill Death.

I’m sorry to leave a negative review. You are an excellent writer and I very much enjoyed the first few chapters. You have had some excellent and very entertaining ideas. I‘ll check back in on the next chapter to see if things change.

Thanks,
Dirt Rider

enjoying

Great chapter. :)