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GamerTronZ46 chapter 1 . 8/12 Hmm Just Asking But When's The Next Update Arriving? |
Squish9 chapter 9 . 8/8 Finally all caught up! Great story, I'm looking foward to seeing Mysterio interact with all the Pro's and UA college while secretly working behind the scenes. |
Klincher chapter 8 . 7/28 Now that I thought about it more, seems like Mina is also a likely candidate for Prowler. Though, only really going off of Spider-Man into Spiderverse powers |
Klincher chapter 5 . 7/28 Is the prowler Hagakure and is electro gonna be Kaminari? Kaminari makes sense, but Hagakure is kinda in the fence since only really the name, Prowler, kinda works with Hagakure. |
Klincher chapter 9 . 7/27 Damnit. I think Vulture is more likely, if we are going off of MCU Vulture that is. And Izuku got his suit from his mither’s secret friend, who is the Tinkerer |
Klincher chapter 9 . 7/26 Calling it now, Izuku’s dad is gonna be Kingpin |
free556655 chapter 9 . 7/23 Man that's was interesting story and I would like to know that will you created where Deku the original timeline come to this timeline,you know like spiderman shattered dimensions or something like that. |
KageForce chapter 9 . 7/22 Awesome story! I really love how far you're deviating from cannon. Keep it up, looking forward to the next chapter! |
Someonerandome chapter 9 . 7/22 Calling it now. Overhaul was Izuku's father. The Yakuzah and Izuku's fathers werehouse being simmiliar.(I think you implied) The sudden stop of paychecks a couple of months ago. (Can't write a check if your dead.) His father disappearing (Figured leading Yakuzah was better than married life) Izuku not having a quirk (Experiment by Overhaul) His own mother not telling him about his dad (Which I always found weird) And finally, his mom not talking him out of all of this (Possible dealt with this before) Correct me if I'm wrong but this matches up to perfectly. |
bauers374 chapter 9 . 7/21 Okay, Maybe Yotsubashi Rikiya will be Green Goblin, I mean they both have that Evil CEO thing going on |
MosesArk Reborn2000 chapter 9 . 7/21 The beginning of the chapter was the harsh reality of the situation. I can understand where they are coming from but at the same time, trying to speed up their training may backfire on them as Eraser and Vlad can only teach them so much in that limited timeframe. Rather then speeding up all the hero course students, they could have maybe just had them all complete more and longer work studies as they are kinda compromising the quality of pros they are producing if they are being told to produce them sooner. Kinda like baking, if you rush things and skip some ingredients to save time, you can't expect the finished product to be as good. Man, with that one attack-Izuku basically masterminded the deaths of 357 pros and injured like 300 more. That's a number so high, that even AFO would be impressed. That combined with all the public backlash against pros like Death Arms and Endeavour really are putting the pros in a bad spot as they now have to deal with the fallout of this attack and the truth that had been made bare to the public. Endeavour...there is little chance he'll recover from this and if he does, I can see him having his ranking destroyed, like lower then Manual low. On another note, it was odd that the teachers assume that he's young because he says that he knew a bully that got in. UA has been around long enough that All Might and Endeavour went there, so why jump to the point that this bully must still be a student, they could easily be a former student. When they discuss Aldera, I'm surprised that they never looked into it sooner as they know that the school is bad news but not one of them ever checked Bakugou files themselves. It never stuck them to double check the files of the student, who has clear anger issues, who came from a school they themselves know is shit? But he did get that S-class ranking, that's something as we don't see many S-class villains and criminals on scene as Overhaul might have been high A-class due to his low activity, if his Yuzaka were more active or he was more violent then maybe S-class. Also, it seems that they haven't caught on to his real identity which is good. It means that he can operate much more smoothly if he doesn't have to worry about someone catching on. Though suspect he'll keep his distance from the detective as even though his hero persona is a hologram, the dude might pick up on something. I'm hoping that we see to see this attack on Nighteye as Dabi now has gear to allow him to use his quirk in larger bursts and with much, much shorter cooldowns. Sure Nighteye fights using predictions but unless he touches the dude, he'll be fighting with outdated information. How the students reacted as also pretty good though I would have thought we would see them talking about it more then they did as even after Bakugo runs off to train, they don't really approach the topic. Kodai has issues handling her emotions so her silence makes sense. Shoto, I really don't know with him as we see in cannon, he doesn't hate his father enough that he doesn't care if he lives or dies but at the same time. He knows his father isn't dead so we don't know if he'll stick around to aid his sister or bail like Natsuo. When it came to the warehouse, I'm still set that his father is either Kingpin or works for an Umbrella style company as you need serious funds and connections to construct an entire underground complex, complete with holding cells and then keep this off the books. Eri and Dabi may grow to become great friends down the line as they are both experienced pain from those that should have cared for them. Midoriya's showing that he is disturb by the death shows that he's still human and not some one dimensional villain who doesn't care. I didn't have anything against Mirio before as we got an explanation on his actions in cannon, still though, seeing him so defeated really got to me. I hope that Midoriya doesn't have anything against him as he seems like the kind of person to look at a story from more then one angle. He knows that heroes still have to work under the legal system and with no proof of abuse or neglect, they had nothing to justify taking Eri, they couldn't just take her and run as that would have been pointless in the end when he just filed a report about them taking his 'daughter' for no good reason and then they would have been forced to hand her back. That would be bad enough but it would also alert him to their interest in him. The fact that Overhaul was still a free man was a testament to his lawyers or his ability to cover up his criminal activities so well that nothing the police and pros could accuse him of would ever make it to court. I laughed when Kodai was googling relationships and what comes with it as I didn't think she was that dense on the topic, she must have almost entered sites she could not like to venture into so many times. Their little meet-up, not a date as Midoriya doesn't even seen to notice that, was good character development for the both of them as we see how well they get along. Kodai doesn't know it but her words of him being a hero have more meaning then she knows as he did save Eri...but he also killed hundreds more. It's gonna make things even bitterer when the truth about him comes out or they have to split due to their different goals in life as 'Mysterio' might move to larger cities like Tokyo or Kyoto as his popularity sores. |
mckertis chapter 5 . 7/21 Good gods, if you had the time to scribble two pages of needless A\Ns - why cant you use it to put more effort in your story instead ? |
mckertis chapter 4 . 7/21 I already envision it clearly, you set up a device to permanently remove quirks - but you clearly wont have the balls to actually use it on Bakago. Because everyone knows Bakago is such a wonderful person, and that would be cruuuuuel. |
mckertis chapter 1 . 7/21 Good job wasting all that space on needless canon scenes repeat. Surely, surely you could have fitted it all in 2 pages worth. |
aSleepyPenguin chapter 7 . 7/20 ... Is Eri a yandere in the making? |