Interesting cross, looking forward to seeing how it plays out, like will Skitter still trigger and will Emma meet Pyrrha?

I like it, could we have more please? Like pretty please? It’s to interesting to stop reading... and Thank‘s for the Story but I need more pleeeeaaaassse~

Nice. Pretty good flow all things considered. The story is structured well and the pacing is good, but it could quickly become tiring if nothing happens. Plot is believable too. Just don't mess it up. Kapish and stay safe during quarantine.

Way can't we just let Annie have aura ?

and then she unlocks Semblance , but PRT think that's power without trigger.

An interesting Fic, though I feel that Pyrrha would be straightforward to her new family about what happened. Plus she’s like only ~14 now instead of the 17 she was in Remnant.

you are making Pyrrha too much OoC

She shouldn't have a reason nor interest in meeting the strange 'Huntress', not yet at least, after all Hunters in Remnant are common and many would like the Invincible Girl as a partner

From her perspective a mask means white fang and criminal, the fight would be seen as Shadow Stalker being a criminal with aura attacking those who invaded her territory and her intervention would be seen as being for the sake of recruitment, after all she waited till Pyrrha showed competence in battle

Ergo, the interest should be one sided from Shadow Stalker wanting Emma as a partner, but Pyrrha having no reason to hold any interest in law breaking

Remember that Hunstmen are public Heroes of Remnant trained by the kingdoms, any attempt to hide one self will be seen with suspicious

This is part of Pyrrha's common sense

This common sense would naturally drive her in the Protectorade, with a clear (personal witnessed) proof of incompetence being needed to make her a vigilante

Live long habits die hard

Unfamiliar situation and the 1st thing you do is reveal your full power?

There wasn't an enemy that was worth of it

Pyrrha is a Champion for a reason, she would take the smart choice, her ability to sense metal and sneak attacks is usually more valuable than the overwhelming power that she already has in her base form

There is a reason that Pyrrha and not Yang was the Invincible Champion

another gopd chapter thanks for writing.

Good work for building the setting more. The flow of consciousness is interesting, makes the relations between what she is analyzing and what that bring feel very natural. As an interlude it does a good job, though I can't feel that it feels a bit on the fast forward. Some descriptions of the house, other things she found interesting, etc. would have been lovely.

Still, the one thing that I kinda dislike is the wait with which these chapters are reuploaded. I do hope though that they are somewhat more revised when compared to their original over on SB. On the other hand, if the wait is due to plotting, and fixing a path for future proceeds, then I am more than happy to wait for the chapters.

As I stated in my last review, I am looking forward to more moral dilemmas over this new life. So far the problem that she stole someone's life is interesting, but I do ask myself if it's going to ramp up in the immediate future. I can only see then.

Hope this review is helpful, and if you do have enough time, I'd love to talk about the fic at length with you.

Have a good day, night, afternoon.

Unsettling-A.I.R.

it's... nice actually. To be reborn is not as easy as people think most of the time, especially when you take over someone's else body.

You have to accept your death, your new lot in life, the knowledge that you can never go back and many other very important details that NO ONE can imagine exactly how to deal with.

Because even if reincarnation was real, no one actually remembers the deed no matter if it would be because the brain of a baby is incapable of long term memory, or because the stress is too much for a soul to bear.

As such we can only speculate.

It's always fun when I see people try to show their speculations about such an inconvenient situation.

so far im really excited to see where this story goes. i literally cant wait for more thanks for updateing so quick.

When's Taylor come ?
Can't wait see our per-Skitter

Why does Worm Story Search day this has 69k words,its not even at 20k

good chapter im very interested to see where this story goes.

you should update this i like it a lot so far.