| Reviews for Jaden's Nightmare Revamped |
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Matsuda Macober chapter 7 . 7/20 I have a Question... Why Chifuyu and Ta and are so strong? They have Nano machines or something like that? Or they are only the ultimate Human form? Or something like that...? |
Xenowishes chapter 3 . 6/7 Happy to see you're continuing this. So far the story continues to follow the IS route. Once again however, there are still multiple grammar issues. Words spelled incorrectly, punctuation missing at the end of sentences, and sentences that don't make any sense. Even the last few chapters haven't been fixed yet. It doesn't seem like much but these errors do add up and they will deter people away from your story. And thank you for the shoutout, i'm happy to hear you like my work. I'd love to hear your thoughts on it. |
uselessman chapter 1 . 5/17 Just a question? This power of jayden is kind like mutant power? Will itu kind of enchanted his is like ghost rider power? Btw for now i keep my eye on this. |
Xenowishes chapter 1 . 5/17 The main character seems unique with those unnatural abilities of him, though if this guy can break the sound barrier on his own, and beat an IS with his abilities, then I look forward to seeing what can challenge him. The biggest Issue I have with this story is the grammar. Every sentence doesn't have a period at the end, there are capital letters where there shouldn't be, numbers that should be spelled as words, and other mistakes that make reading this hard to enjoy. When you get a chance, you should read this over and fix those errors. |
franciskanneh007 chapter 1 . 5/17 Keep doing what you are doing |