Such a bittersweet ending. I love it, that at least he knew what she was to him before the end. Wonderful job!

By all that is holy, I had no idea where you were headed with this. Should I have? YES, dammit. But blithely I followed. Now I am a hot, blubbering mess. But it was beautiful, and perfect -great character voices, well researched plot/theme. LOVE IT. Saving for later.

Oh wow. This was tense but good, in that they're out and moving. I hope they can make it to safety!

I'm really enjoying this. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh my gosh, poor Zane! This was such a hard chapter to read but so good. I hope things get easier for them at some point.

I love this chapter. I love the extra mile you went to research the injury. I love the tenderness and wistfulness we get to see in Jo. She's so frickin' in love with him...I hope he comes to realize that by the end of your fic. This cliffhanger? *evil laughter* we deserve this. My favorite line of this chapter "she breathes his scent in deeply and fights the wave of nostalgia and buried memories of a timeline gone forever." This is the best kind of torture. I'm a sick person. I can't wait for the next piece. :)

OMG, I love this chapter so much! You did a great job showing how much she does actually care for him, and how much she has to reconcile her Zane and this Zane. Wonderful job!

Great story so far!

Oooh, this is such a good chapter! Poor Zane, I hope he isn't hurt too badly that Jo can't save him.

This is great! I hope everyone is okay by the end and they get through it as best they can, even if it means the end of Eureka.

Oooh! Such a good start! I am definitely intrigued.