Reviews for Back to the Beginning
Guest chapter 18 . 7/22
Thank you for a great story. I am really enjoying it.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/21
Did he really leave the Elder Wand, with Tom? Please NO! He could've put it almost anywhere else.
DarkLordWhatsit chapter 22 . 7/23
I can't help but picture Stargate Atlantis with those transporters and the description of the ship reminds me of a goa'uld transport (probably butchered the spelling)
The Deck Master chapter 7 . 7/22
Ok that pretty fucking clever of Dobby.
The Deck Master chapter 7 . 7/22
Fun Fact, to destroy a planet just pump more energy than the planet can hold and it goes bye bye!

So if it has 24 energy pump 25 in.
swiftrabbit chapter 26 . 7/21
You've made an awesome world here! I liked that it was more Slice of Life rather than Epic Adventure. I haven't read very many of those types of stories and I found it refreshing.

Well, I'm off to the sequel!
Read ya later :)
noylj chapter 18 . 7/20
Fireworks have oxidizers as part of their chamistry-just as you can fire a gun in space.
You actually fall for carbon dioxide and global warming? If you want to clean up pollution, go after communist countrirs
Aluminum is not a good conducter of electricity? My house wiring and most high voltage lines take insult at that.
Aluminum Conductor ACSR for Overhead Power Transmission line
Application
The conductors are suitable for use in all practical spans on wood poles, transmission towers,and other structures. Application range from extra high voltage(EHV) transmission lines to sub-service spans at distribution or utilization voltages on private premises.
ACSR(Aluminum Conductor Steel Reinforced) has a long service record because of its economy ,dependability, and strength to weight ratio. The combined light weight and high conductivity of aluminum with strength of the steel cores enable higher tensions ,less sag,and longer spans than any alternative.
noylj chapter 15 . 7/20
The moon is always full, as far as the sun goes. There is no time of full moon EXCEPT from some other body than the sun and moon. PS: the full moon is only a fleeting occurance every ~28 days, and, even the most inexperienced can see the "day" of the full moon as: it's almost full, it's very close to full, and it's much less full than yesterday.
quentinusorus chapter 27 . 7/20
I love this story.
noylj chapter 6 . 7/19
You never escape gravitational pull, it just tapers off. Remember, the moon orbits earth due to center of gravity (both still effect each other).
You may be weightless, but you still have same mass, so Nev would still hurt his head
Godless Turtle chapter 2 . 7/18
"You intend to vandalize the moon?"
XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD!
Linpo chapter 27 . 7/18
Loved the story, and your in depth expansion of magic based on science
Lerris chapter 6 . 7/18
The biggest problem in this story is you basically keep tossing in implausible stuff. I think somewhere around the beginning of the story you had a house built in hours with magic. Even if you could do that, why would you? You want your house to be solid without magic, then enhance it. Similarly he built a spacecraft in what a few weeks? You would be insane to just basically be relying on a transfiguration not reverting. It would be far better to build something without magic and then enhance it, that way you have natural strength if the magic fails.

A more realistic approach is to start with a private jet and trained pilot, then enhance its strength with runes and such, then use trunks to store enough liquid oxygen to add to the fuel so it still burns. It would still take months to years of test flights and such to solve problems, but would be more plausible to get going quickly.
noylj chapter 1 . 7/18
Albie has lots of intentions, but even good intensions can pave the road to hell. And Albie has paved a superhighway in his time.
I have never read a story that bashes Albie or Molly-they seem to mostly simply shine a light on their nature
Aetherium21 chapter 2 . 7/15
Really difficult to enjoy Harry's dialogue, it reads like he's on crack.
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