Hi, I just wanted to tell you that this book is getting off on a great start but you made a typo the last paragraph. It's hood right?

I can't stop rereading this

June 25th is my birthday!

Nice. Though you should know that red wine is healthy.

Why’s Percy’s cabin colored red, white, and pink? His favorite color is blue.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Nico protection squad is in this

Happy early birthday, since I'm probably not going to be online for a couple weeks. 14 is fun...I just turned 15 lol. (I hate learning to drive...I prefer swimming, but my new summer job as a lifeguard requires training, I've already done a much more intense one, but I still need to formally attend training to get my certification. Training which is now postponed and/or cancelled for the year.) Bad me. You're rambling again. (No, I don't THINK I have ADHD, but I can seem like I do.) Back to the point, happy birthday! Stay safe at home and make yourself a cake! Read a book! Beat my record of 941,739 words read in a day! Don't question how I kept track of that, I googled the number of words in each book I read, had none I didn't read cover to cover, then I did the math on paper because the calculator was missing. Here I go rambling again...I'm going to spare you the agony of trying to follow my trai n of thought, and just say it one more time...Happy birthday!

Jeez, even I'm not that underweight lol. No, my parents don't starve me, I'm just one of those people who's tall but also has very little muscle mass. Doesn't mean I'm not strong, I can deadlift 200 pounds if I need to, but if you punch me on the shoulder you hit bone and hurt your hand. I still prefe speed to ppwer in a fight though lol. I can't use my weigt so I give the other peson a chance to use theirs, deflect them to the side, and strike the back of the head. Or I just use my long legs to knock them back with a kick first lol. My kicks can throw an average person back and knock over a stronger person if they aren't ready.

I am Catholic, and I would like to point out that, no offense, but that is not how the Catholic Church sees homosexuality. I don't deny that there are people within thechurch who feel that way, but the church as a whole teaches that God made them, so God loves them. They may be called to chastity, but because their burden in life was greater than ours their reward in Heaven will be greater for that. I don't mean to offend anyone, but I feel the need to point this out. We don't hate you guys! Quite the contrary. (I realize that it was different in the '30s, but it's still a common misconception so I decided to point it out.)

UMMMMMM ? HOW DO YOU READ THIS CHAPTER? SO MUCH CODE.

I think that whatever you uploaded or pasted wasn't compatible with Fanfiction...it's readable but you have to skip around the instructions for the computer. Also, autocorrect is like that, if a word's too long or just not well-known it'll get marked wrong. (Chemical name for Titin is a good example...it's something like 189,819 - I think? - letters long and takes three hours to pronounce. Or autocorrect decided that a different word would work beter for no apparent reason. That happens too. Idk why I'm talking so much...maybe bc it's 2am and my mind is wandering...anyway, point is, ignore autocorrect if you know you're right, it wasn't meant to be perfect.) (That's a lot to put in parentheses lol)

Good story! I kinda prefer Sadico to Solangelo, but I like the story. Now, to fulfil my reputation for having constructive criticism in every review…I found almost no errors, good job! (I need to cut you people some slack in my reviews sometimes lol)