Ooo I'm loving this! Can't wait for more!

Your idea for the story is really interesting and unique compared other ones which is why I like reading it. My issues with the story that prevents me from fully enjoying it is the fast, simplistic plot and lack of character development.

You spreed up the plot, writing scenes where I think you could have really gone in depth with than just stating what happened. I feel like the story lacks a lot of descriptions in terms of what is going on in the story. This may be because of grammar that it makes your plot really plain. I don’t know if your doing this intentionally, but it seems like your just writing what first comes to mind and don’t go in depth to explain it anything. Some issues I have is you don’t tell your readers anything plot worthy. You don’t explain how does one get chosen to be an Oracle. Is Kagome the only Oracle, if not where at the others? Why does Kaede know so much about them, etc. This lack of information downplays you’re entire story.

My second issue is the lack of character development. You mainly explain things mostly in Kagome’s point of view, which isn’t bad at all, but you don’t write her or other characters as anyone special. What I mean is, you write them being present in the story but don’t describe them. One example of this is when Rin becomes friends with Kagome and Sango, you said that after a while, Rin told them about her past with her family. You could have gone so much in depth with everyone’s character. You could have slowed down and described their building friendship and how slowly Rin opened up about her past than rushing it in one paragraph. Another example is when Kagome first arrived to the palace. You briefly described her resisting being there, confused and scared, and then suddenly you write her as being fine and happy. You jump over important places where you could have really described obstacles for the characters which is why there aren’t really character developments.

I know my criticism may be harsh, and I apologize but I really want this story to be amazing. I just hope you take time and slow down when writing and really think from the readers POV and explain things.

Yes! Love the chapter!

great now she's drugged...wow what an experience Kag just went through...i believe Inu is getting ready to claim a mate? nee?...can't wait for next update

Man I’m loving this story! And the chapter endings are killing me, leaving me desperately wanting more! You’re wonderful! Thanks for the update.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh cliffy! Can't wait to keep reading :) hopefully inu soon realizes she is his mate.

Oh man poor Kagome I'm glad inuyasha saved her in time. If he didn't I don't think sir fluffy would have cared resulting to a bloody fight with him and Inuyasha. All though if that did happened in a future chapter I bet fluffy would have been uncaring and inuyasha would go full demon and his demon side calls Kagome his intended. But that's only if you do put that in a future chapter. Keep up the good work.

Oh no, Kagome! I hope Inuyasha can save her fast!

Wow, this is great! I'm so glad I finally get to read this

WHAAAATTTT!?
God that ending left me so uneasy!
I just binge read all six chapters, thank you very much. This story is so interesting, I like the dinamics of everything so far. And I wonder if Sesshomaru has noticed inuyasha imprinted on her . Can’t wait for next one!

Thanks for the update! These cliff hangers are killing me! Love it

Oh kami Inuyasha better find Kags and fast no telling what those guys have plan and it maybe a plan that may have Inuyasha go full demon. Can't wait for the next chapter to find out.

Oh no poor Kagome. Hopefully Inuyasha’s coming to her rescue and better never let her out of his sight ;-)
Great chapter. I love it! Can’t wait to read more!

This gets better and better. Now I have suspense and a little mystery added into the mix. She should have kicked in the jewels though.

wha?...how could you leave off like that...lol...love it...can't wait for next chapter