Reviews for Spear of the Evening
MrCcoz chapter 1 . 7/7
I'm liking the story very much so far. I would love for Ned to he a bit stronger in the face of Robert and others who would harm his family. I also really dobt like catelyn but I'm guessing that is by design. It hurts to think about how Ashara and Ned had to suffer.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/3
Opps, Cadfael,
M chapter 2 . 6/3
For investigative ideas from the middle ages checklut a ahow called Cadfillle ( spelling uncertain. ) A B c production I seem to recall. Excellent show.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/3
The size of a grown dog ? What breed of grown dog ?! No-one ever says ?! Uncomfortable, he made the Measter uncomfortable. The question was discomforting to the Measter. ..he sat on his hind end and looked at Torr... or he sat on his butt and looked at Torr. . ...they have more then likely gotten worse. ...all the more safe... Not more safer.! ... and yes as Balish says, "Starks, fast tempers, slow minds."
M chapter 1 . 6/3
I never understood why Ned thought he needed permission to go after his sister from anyone ! He was a leader of his own men and free to claim independance for the North if he chose or even the Iron Throne as he got there before Robert.! He could and should have gone straight for his sister and Robert be damned.!
M chapter 2 . 5/30
Lady Catelyn. ...His death would make my throne all the more SAFE... Ned needs to turn his ass around and go back to Winterfell.! Declaring independance once he gets there.! Sansa would be better off with anyone else then Joffery ! And Robert deserves what happens to him.!
M chapter 1 . 5/30
Let Torren have Dawn when he gets to Starfall ! That will show them all !
Nivek Beldo chapter 2 . 5/30
Who ends up with Arianne? Jon or Thorren?
Sparky She-Demon chapter 2 . 5/30
At least Sansa told the truth in the end this time. Poor Torrhen, everyone thinks he's a Targaryen when he's not, and the actual Targaryen heads to the Night's Watch.
Lil Swag chapter 1 . 5/15
This is awesome