Nice chapter.

More than fine with Daenarys being hurt here. She's been completely unlikable and cruel. She's been a terrible parent, a terrible ruler, and a terrible person. She has had no redeeming qualities at all.

Interesting story so far. Please update soon.

A very nice read, although on the bitter end of life but understandable. Its one of those times when Murphy decides to fubar max. I was really thinking that rhaenys would try to make things better and involve with the small folks but something will go wrong and whatever chance of Dany getting normal will be blown to hell. I prayed that it won't happen but I was afraid it will and that's what you did. Damn. All the progress with Dany is gone into negative now. More angst and hateful chapters to go through.
Although you are portraying the family to be too hateful/distrustful, I can understand it(not like but understand). Sometimes words just don't come out right and the situation escalates badly. One thing leads to another and soon you find yourself in a situation where you can't talk your heart out no matter how much you want to. Hopefully, Jon will do something. Son and mother are being too rigid, yes both of them. Rhae tried but could not escape her mother's deed. Now only Jon can do anything. Please don't make this story any more angsty than it needs to be. Attack on Rhae is already pushing it, you are pushing the story to a chasm where you can't pull back the progress done to characters. Either you will have to go for a sad ending or make the story very long to mend what you did.

Anyway, nice story. Would love to read more if things tone down a bit. So much hatefulness I can't take, sorry. But the story is awesome, nice writing skills :)

great story so far, keep up the good work

Dany and Jon need to sit and talk, let everything out and after that the four of them and settle things once and for all, maybe not become a happy family with a happy ending but to reach a middle point, at least rhaenys understand her duties now, but daeron just want to do whatever he wants but he needs to understand he is the heir and next king of westeros like it or not.

Wow that went south fast at the end!

Broooooooo, not Rhaenys...goddamn it, now to wait how Daenerys burns down everyone, Jon probably gomma die of sadness and so will Daeron. Still think Rhaenys and Jon is the best thing ever tho, you do an excellent job writing them together.

No! Not sweet Rhaenys!

i really love this story i have been following since day one. the arguing between the kids and dany is starting get a bit old now tho,

keep up the good work

Yeh, Daerons out of line, well so is Daenerys, but those words aren't gonna help his cause. Poor Rhaenys /3

Wow that blew up at the end. Loved it. Now I'm wondering what will happen when Jon comes back into the fold.

Daeron is a little bitch, what would jon say knowing how he is now for him.

Dany and Jon well dany-the show dany idea this story and I like it.

Last scene was so great, didnt know how much Jon and Rhaenys are just the father daughter duo. Great work.