way too fast paced. lay off the dope!

This was awful. Unreadable. One slice of advice for you; nothing disrupts the reader quite like an author's note inserted mid text.

plz update, I really like your story.

This was Piece of shit...seriously...I quite liked half of the world under Death Eater rule...

BUT FUCK HARRY IS GOING TO HELP DUMBLEDORE AGAIN? FUCCCCKKK

Why exactly is Potter feeling compelled to aid the wizarding who might I add betrayed him by killing the Dark One?

this fan fiction is awesome! I love the idea of Shadowkeepers! but when will daggyr and venom realise that snape is a spy and enrolled as a shadowkeeper? please update soon! I really wanna read about the Quidditch match.

Hey! You might be wondering why I haven't reviewed befor. Well, I was just in the mood for an FF with a butt-kicking Harry and some major Ron/Hermione/Dumbledoor bashing. So, I found yours. Now that we have that covered... I have a feeling people are going to laugh at Harry's pathetic team, so I just would like it a LOT if he totally DEMOLISHED them! They should totally see him fight sometime in the future and see how totally and completely awesome he is. Oh, and Harry should find out about Snape and confront him. One more thing... MAKE THE PEOPLE WHO BETRAYED HIM PAY! Destroy them! Demolish them! Incinerate them!... *gasps for air* Good. Now that I got that out of my system... Keep writing! (I hope you like LONG reviews, cuz you sorta just got one) ;)

-Nock and Bolt out

love it

update update update please please please!

This story is great! Can Daggyr still become an Animagus? I'm looking forward to when Severus discovers who Daggyr really is. I would call this a 2x ultimate favorite.

Can you please explain that last sentence? What stone? And what grooves?

Ever think about continuing this one?

very good fanfic and i know a small bit of latin

Well, the story plot in itself was good. It's what made the story unique in it's own way. There's just one tiney little problem with the story. Your writing skills leave a lot to be desired. Granted, I don't have a lot of stories posted myself, but I have no doubt that even I could write the story better. The whole assassin clan idea, however, I never would have thought of. It took a lot of imagination to come up with that. I really enjoyed that part of the story. Unfortunatley, that was the only part of the story(aside from the growing romance between Daggyr and Venom) that kept me clicking the next chapter button. Your writing style is choppy, and leaves out a lot of details, and spelling mistakes are common. If the story was written better, though, it definatley would have made my favorites.

I read this story several years back and thought it was amazing. However, I forgot to bookmark it or put it on chapter alert. I have now been looking for this story for more than a year. I am so thankful that I have finally found it. BTW, great story, and keep up the good work.

Darker Than Larry