wow, it's not that long since the start of the story but I feel it's already way more fluent than at the beginning.
and wohoo character development!
I really hope Ace begins to heal. what I like about your story is that people take time to change and you adapt that quite well.
even though everyone in that family kind of accepted Ace being there a bit too quick... but he is a devil fruit user so..
And comparing ace and robin?
brilliant!
they are my favourite characters so I am double as happy.
quoting Franky's words as well!
you now how to reach your readers and what parts of One piece to show and what not. that's impressive as it's so much!
thanks for the new chapter

This chapter hurt. Can’t wait for more of this fic!

I love this! I love the concept and how you’ve executed it so far. My only question is that is Ace/Tala going to remain platonic. Because the age difference would make it really dodgy if not. Not a criticism, just wondering.

I like it! Can’t wait for more!

ah good to know why tala is home and this is some realistic sibling interaction. will you maybe write one chapter from ace's point of view? maybe later on, that would be lovely. I wonder why tala doesn't want to spoil anything on one hand ace might return on the other he technically died. might as well ensure him that Luffy is safe

hey there I really like your story concept. wonder what the reason behind ace appearance is and how he will adapt in our world!